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The Good Neighbor

Part 1

THE GOOD NEIGHBOR

by Lewis Chappelle

(Please check out the ‘Authors Notes’ at the end of this piece.)

“Good morning, Mike. Haven’t seen much of you recently; how’re doin,” Jim called out.

Mike walked toward Jim’s house. “I doing ok these days actually. Just got a clean bill of health from the VA yesterday. Feel’en pretty fit. They don’t want me to start any major work for awhile yet though.”

“I can understand that, with all you’ve been through. By the way, I don’t think you’ve met my wife since you moved in. Is that right?” Jim queried.

“Don’t believe I’ve had that good fortune. Just moved in and have had a time getting settled. Be glad to meet her though. Seen her pick up the paper a few times. Quite a looker, if ya don’t mind me say’n so.”

“Well come on in and say howdy. Her name is Paige.”

“Paige, come here and meet our neighbor,” Jim yelled once they were inside his home.

Well, Paige might have looked good in her robe, fetching the morning paper but she was absolutely stunning in only her high heels and a small leather vest that covered her back and only barely covered her tits. . Mike, an ex Marine, could not help but let out a long, low, appreciative, whistle.

“Turn around Paige and let Mike get a good look at you.”

Mike saw a stunning women with what he recognized as the tell tail signs of whip marks across her ass and legs.

“Tell Mike about those whip marks, slave, and how ya got ‘em.”

“I’m really embarrassed, Sir. You seeing me all naked and such. Mike and I are married but I really need him to dominate me and treat me as his sex slave. Not like he owns me or anything, but just for the sexual excitement of it. When we are in the house alone, he keeps me naked and I didn’t expect visitors. But, then again he’s always trying to catch me off guard.

“When I don’t measure up to his demands, he lays a single tail on me so I’ll do a better job following his orders. This last time, I didn’t get the bills paid in time and we got a service charge added to our account which really is unforgivable. He was right to whip me, Sir. And I’m sure to learn from the hurting. ”

“Ok, Paige, why don’t you get our guest something to drink. What’s your order this early morning, Mike?”

“Just some iced tea or water would be fine, Paige. Thanks.”

“Mike, now that Paige is out of ear shot, I want to get your take on something I’ve had in mind ever since I found out that you were once a Marine Drill Instructor and then an interrogator with the service.

“Since you have unique skills and can’t get out to make a career in civilian life for awhile, would you like to work for me and train Paige to be a better submissive girl?

“You live alone, at least temporarily, and she is here all day with nothing to do. I give her little tasks now and again, but she doesn’t seem to have the attention span I’d like her to have. She tends to be lazy and watches a lot of t.v. -- girl stuff for the most part.

“And, she doesn’t take as much of an interest in her physical appearance as I’d like her to. I can’t be spending all my time working on her habits, but perhaps you could help me. No funny stuff. I wouldn‘t mind having her suck you off or even taking it up the ass, but no vaginal penetration if you get my drift. You could treat her anyway you want but I do want to find her fit enough to be able to service me when I get home from work.”

“Jim, I think it would be good to let that idea percolate between you two for a few days before we decide on the next step. It would be a big leap for both of you and I’d want you to be clear what privileges and prerogatives you’d be giving me.

“For example, would Paige consider me her Master in your absence? Would you give me specific, as we say in the military, mission assignments to work on with Paige? Would you give me feedback regarding her behavior from time-to-time?”

“What you suggest is not out of the question, but I’d want our agreement to be acceptable to all of us.

“Why don’t we have another chat here, same time, next week. That will give us enough time to consider the implications of the deal. Is that fair?”

The meeting was agreed to as all three drank their iced tea. Mike could see excessive cunt fluid slowly oozing onto Paige’s upper thigh apparently in anticipation of that next meeting. _______________________________________________________________

“Good morning Mike, did you have a good week?” Jim called out when he saw him get the newspaper. “Did you have breakfast yet?”

“Jim! Good morning to you too. No, I haven’t had a bite at all; are you inviting me over for breakfast?”

“For Breakfast and a serious chat, it you are ready,” Jim added.

“Is Paige ok with your idea?” Mike asked.

“I’m going to let you ask her that question directly, Mike. After all, she is scheduled to be the main participant in the project, right?”

“That’s for sure. Let me slip on some better jeans and I’ll be right over. Just coffee for me.”

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“”Paige, Mike is interested in your take regarding my suggestion last week. What say you?

Paige was wearing three inch heels and a very short morning robe, which barely covered her ass cheeks. She looked mighty good to Mike. She did not sit down when she started to answer Jim’s question; in fact she turned her eyes away from both men.

“Master Jim, I’ve given a lot of thought to your idea. I haven’t been able to get much sleep because it has made me so restless and on edge. And, the idea has made me quite horny too. I’m normally an easily aroused girl, but this week has been the worst. I haven’t been able to keep from touching myself. Sorry, dear, but it’s true.

“After all is said and done, I am ready to work with Mike as you suggest, at least on a two month trial basis. As I understand the rules, Mike will have control over me while you are at work. He can take me where he wants to. He can punish and abuse me as he sees fit. And, I must be compliant to his wishes and service him with my mouth and my ass.

“I can live with that!” she said.

“Paige, in addition to what you’ve just said, you will have to be very candid with me and tell me all of your thoughts regarding your erotic inclinations. I will control your climaxes while I’m on duty. Jim may treat you as he sees fit when he is home with you, but when it’s me, I will expect your complete obedience to me. Further, anything I say to you or do to you is to be considered confidential between us at least for the two month trial period and that means having everything private including with Jim.

“Now Jim, are you ok with all this? What are your exact requirements in the venture? What do you expect me to accomplish during the next two months?”

“Mike, at the end of the two months, I hope you will have trained Paige well enough so that she obeys my every command without question. And, I want her to be able to control her own sexual desires and only have orgasms when give permission to do so.

“Furthermore, I want her to look better physically, if you can believe that. Her muscles need more definition. If this venture goes further, I will no doubt have additional terms. But, for now that would seem good enough. Agreed?”

“Well, that went well enough, don’t you think, Paige?” asked Mike.

“Yes, Sir, it did and I’m excited. Do you want me to come to your place Monday or are you coming here?”

“I’ll come here as soon as I can after Jim leaves the driveway. I want to find you nude, kneeing, with your head on the floor arms outstretched in front of you palms also on the floor waiting for me to come in. From that moment on, you will refer to me as Master or Sir. I will refer to you by any name I wish, including, slave, slut, and pain slut, Are you clear on that, Paige?”

Again, with her eyes downcast, Paige replied, “Yes, Sir, I understand your directions and I’m very nervous. Please have mercy on me, Sir.”

“You will get no mercy from me, Paige. Get used to that! See ya, early Monday.”

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Mike opened the front door to Jim’s home. He was carrying a black bag similar to the ones doctors used to tote for house calls. He found Paige prostate and naked, tits pressed down on the cold marble foyer floor.

“What is your name, slave?” Mike asked sternly. He knew there was a basic psychological element in having her identify herself out loud by her given name. When she would say it, he would know, at that point, that she understood she was in a subservient position and in fact was yielding to him.

“My name is Slave Paige, Sir,” she responded without looking at him. “I’m at your service.”

“What is your name again?” he asked.

“My name is Slave Paige, Sir,” she whispered.

“No, your name is Slut Slave Paige. Now what is your name? Tell me loud and clear!”

“My name is Slut Slave Paige, Sir. I’m at your service, Sir.” She sounded like a marine recruit.”

“That’s better, Slut Slave Paige. Now, get me a cup of black coffee and bring it to me in the sitting room immediately. And make hot.”

Paige hustled to her feet and ran into the kitchen bare foot.

“Slut Slave Paige, put on your highest heeled shoes and a pair of stay-up white hose. And bring a pair of small, cotton thong panties to me. You must have cotton panties don’t you?”

“Yes, Sir I do. I’ll be right back.”

“Here are the panties you wanted, Sir. I hope these four inch white heels and white hose are satisfactory to you, Sir.”

“Stand in the middle of the room and spread your legs wide apart. Put your arms behind your head and offer your tits to me. Arch your back and stick out your ass. I have some questions to ask of you and you will stay in the position I’ve just described until I’m done with you.”

When she was in the exaggerated pose Mike specified, he marveled at Paige’s body. But, he knew that after he got through with her, she would even be more stunning; on the order of a bona fide beauty contestant winner.

“Slut Slave Paige, you are behaving quite well so far and I’m impressed with your willingness to obey me without even knowing how strict of a dominant I might be. So far so good. But, just so you know, I’m telling you, I’m a bad dude. I’ve had jobs where it was my responsibility to make things happen and I’ve hurt people who wouldn’t cooperate with me in getting done what had to be done, know what I mean?”

“I’m pretty sure I know. In fact, I kind had a suspicion that you were tough, since you have that big scar down the side of your face which makes you seem even more brutal than you really might be.”

“Slave, I am as brutal and ferocious as I appear. Believe, it!

“Now, before we get to talking too much about me, Slave, tell me about your yourself. Tell me about your body measurements and how old you are. Tell me how sensitive you nipples and clit are. Tell me everything I need to know about you and your up bringing.”

“Sir, I’m twenty three years old,” she began. “I married Jim a year ago but we dated for almost three years before that. We met at a frat party at our college and dated him exclusively all through school. He was good to me, and he seemed to have the potential for meeting my special needs as a submissive girl.

“I’ve gotten a lot of my ideas about marriage and what a relationship between a man and a women should be from my Mom. She was a quiet lady and did what she was told to do. Mom was a petite but well built. She was a size two when they got married and Dad never let her gain an ounce other than when she was pregnant; he actually measured her daily calorie intake and wouldn’t let her eat if she gained a pound even as she got older.

“Dad was the dominant one in the family but he never hit us. He was a hard worker and did his best to make sure we had the best life possible.

“I get my height from my Dad. I’m five foot six and weigh a consistent 123 pounds. Last time I checked I was a 36, 24, 35 and I use a C cup and fill it pretty full. My nipples are sensitive but they invert from time-to-time. My clit is pretty big when it’s stimulated and I can cum and cum and cum under the right conditions. Jim thinks I have good legs and a nice ass; and I guess I do, if I do say so myself.”

“Yes, I’d say you have good legs too. A lot of girls wear heels to help show off their legs but they don’t have the right structure; there is not much they can do. In your case, with some heavy work on the ham strings and calves, yours will be first class.

“Do you like the way your body looks, slave?”

“Sir, that’s a loaded question. No girl is completely satisfied. In my case, if I could just make it happen, I’d like to increase my shoulder and core strength, and improve the muscular definition of my shoulders, back and legs. Any other questions, Sir?”

“How often does Jim punish you, slave and how’s he usually do it?”

“I like it when he’s mad at me but I will try to keep him from beating me by getting him horny and then letting him use me until he is spent. I like to see just how far I can push him and still get off without being whipped.

“You did see some whip marks on me last week. They were from a single tail; and did they hurt. I don’t know how many lashes he gave me but, he doesn’t have a heart for beating me. He’ll use the whip when I can‘t talk him out of it; that’s his usual form of punishment these days. Once he had me sleep on the concrete in the cellar for some bad thing I did, but that was sometime ago.”

“What was the most erotically embarrassing thing you’ve ever done, Slave?”

While she was thinking how to answer him, Mike retrieved a small camera from his black bag. He took many shots of her as she held the position she had been ordered to keep. Paige seemed to fidget as he walked around her snapping away, but finally collected her thoughts.

“It was a long time ago, Sir. Jim took me on a date and then drove deep into the woods which surrounded my home. He spread out a blanket and I knew he wanted to fuck me. But he also wanted to see me prance around totally naked in the woods. I think he really wanted somebody to come along and see me. It didn’t happen but I was scared, which seemed to make the fuck great.”

“Do you like to be fucked? Ever been fucked in the ass? Ever been fucked while you were tied up?” Mike inquired, shooting multiple questions at her at once to see if she was paying close attention to him.

“Sir, again, most girls would likely get flustered by such direct questions from a virtual stranger. To add to that I’m a bit on edge because I also know of your background and that you might hurt me if I don’t submit to you quickly and directly.

“Yes, I like to flirt and fuck, and maybe even more than most girls. In fact, I have a very high level of sexual energy. I never have been ass fucked, but wondered what that would be like. Mike always screws me laying down and while he has blind folded me, which I find exciting, he’s never tied me up for any reason. Can you believe that?”

“Put on a blindfold and show me how you arouse yourself, slave.”

“I’m used to lying down when I arouse myself, Master Mike. May I lay down now to show you what I do, Sir?”

“I want you to be as comfortable as you can. Take your time. We have all day. Just let me know when you can‘t hold back any more and don‘t cum until I give you the go ahead, Slave.”

Paige started to arouse herself by pulling her nipples out and pinching them hard. Then she opened her legs and slid a finger slowly into her moist cunt. Then two fingers. And her legs began to quiver.

When she finally opened her labia to expose her clit fully it was standing at proud attention. She pressed and circled her love button then squeezed her leg together and had an orgasm. In fact, she had three rather exciting ones in a row.

Mike reached in his black bag and brought out a small, personally and uniquely engineered, TENS unit with a long double tipped set of rods at the end. He quietly moved to Paige. She did not hear him and could not see him. He pulled the trigger and she felt the pang of electricity surge through her left nipple at just the same time as she heard the loud “click” from the trigger mechanism.

Paige shrieked in pain and pulled her arms over her tits. Her toes actually curled under and she drew her knees to her chest.

“Slave, straighten up and put your hands and forearms under your ass and don’t move them until I give you permission. Do you know why I stunned you, slave?”

Paige was still in a fog. She had no idea what prompted Mike to hurt her.

“Slave Paige, I asked you a question, now answer me!” he demanded.

“Sir, I’m really not sure. I’m recovering from a terrible sting to my tit. And, I can’t think straight. With my hands under my ass, I feel so exposed and vulnerable lying here. But, I’ll tell you this, my cunt is on fire just as my tit is. I think I going to cum again.”

“Don’t you dare, slave. Keep yourself under control and answer my question.”

“Wait,” she said, “maybe the reason you shocked me was that I didn’t ask for permission before I had that last climax. Was that it, Sir?”

“Yes, Slave, that was the exact reason you were disciplined. And, it could have been worse. Much worse. The setting on my equipment was only on the three level out of ten.”

He reset the control to four, held the rods close to her right nipple, and fired again.

“Oh my god! Oh my gracious god in heaven,” she screamed. “That’s terrible. The sting is really bad. Far worse than the first time,” she shrieked. “I’ll be good, I really will, but please, pretty please, don’t shock my poor tits again with that thing.”

And, without warning, she had a gigantic orgasm. And another. She screamed and she cried.

Mike took the white cotton panties she had brought with her and stuffed them in her mouth to keep her quiet.

“Okay, I’ll let you simmer down for a few minutes. But, I want you to imagine what you would feel like if I zapped you with a full nine or a ten setting. You would not die or even convulse, but you would wish you were dead. It’s a pain that assaults your nervous system and doesn’t damage tissue. At low levels it can be quite nice but at high levels it will not result in any sexual pleasure. The pain will last in your head longer than on your body.

“Imagine what it would feel like if I zapped your clit hard. You don’t want that, but that’s what you’ll get if I don’t get some positive responses from you, and if I don’t get some glowing reports about you from Master Jim, starting tonight. He removed the blindfold from her eyes and the panties from her mouth so she could speak.

“Now, Slave, I want you to offer your ass to me. I want you to find the words to let me know you really want me to break your virgin asshole and fuck you hard. Start talking when you are ready, slave. And make it convincing.”

Paige, turned over and got on her knees which she spread wide. She bent her back and reached through her legs to lubricate her anus with her cunt juices. She moved her hips up and down invitingly. She pressed a moist finger on her anal sphincter to open it up a bit. It was a stubborn rascal. Finally it gave way and she reapplied her cunt fluids to two fingers. She moaned and quivered; always raising and lowering her hips in genuine “fuck me hard” action. She finally reached around with her arms so she could pull has ass cheeks wide apart.

“Master, Mike, if it pleases you Sir, I’m all set for you to fuck my ass, Sir. I am as horny as all get out. It would give me a great deal of satisfaction to have you be the first one to take my ass. Drill me deep. Penetrate me hard. Please, Sir, fuck my ass if you think I’m worthy enough for you to take there. I beg you, Sir. Fuck my ass now, please.”

Mike was impressed. “Where did you learn about the pleasures of being ass fucked, slave? How did you know what to do, you slutty little whore?”

“Sir, I’ve seen my share of raunchy movies and I’ve always wanted Master Jim to take me in the ass, but he hasn’t so far. But, I was prepared for him if he ever did.”

“Pull your cheeks apart wider. Let me know by your actions that you want me in your ass. And, when I get there, don’t make a sound, slave. You know the consequences.”

Instead of making a sudden attempt to rape her ass, Mike pressed a thin finger of ginger root into her sensitive hole while she held herself open for him. It didn’t take long before Paige felt the slow, hot burn, in her ass. She never had felt that sensation before and she screamed as the pain bite inside her.

Then, while she was still in the grip of hot, discomforting torment, Mike lubricated her ass again and pressed a small, very cold, aluminum butt plug into her; up to its hilt. Paige had just gotten used to the sensation of penetrating heat when the sensation of cold began to take hold. She never uttered a word as Mike rotated the cold plug around in her ass hole.

When he removed the plug he said, “Tell me again, what you wanted me to do with you, slave?” He made it sound like he had somehow forgotten.

“Master, I really want to service your cock with my ass Sir. But, my ass was on fire, now its freezing. I’ll do my best to make it a good experience for you, I promise, even though I’m in a bad way,” she said in an uneven voice.

“Well, let’s see what we can do about that,“ he said.

Mike bathed her ass with a lukewarm compress and liberally applied a cool, soothing, ointment directly on her sphincter. After all, he was going to make sure conditions were right for his treasured prick.

“Master, it still hurts,” she whispered as he pushed his engorged prick against her asshole. “Please, have mercy on me.

“I’m trying to forget about the burn and relax and let my poor sphincter let you in easily but it isn’t working. Please press harder.” She pressed backward.

“Oh lord! Your in,” she said, sounding relived.

“Yes, as they said in poker, I’m all in,” Mike said.

He had inched his full cock into her ass a fraction of an inch at a time until he was in her all the way to his balls. He had taken it slowly and added lubricant each time he worked into her again. She began to undulate her hips and back again which created great pressure and pleasure to his cock. She could feel his hot jism flush into her.

“You did well, slave girl. We’ll do that again.”

He laid her out full on the carpet on her back and began to caress her. Her skin was soft and supple. And her long blond hair was silky and was cut just so it covered her nipples when she was standing but lying down it cascaded erotically to the floor.

“What did you think of that, you shameless slave, girl?”

“I was good with that. With some practice and some manual clitoral stimulation to go with it, I’d be real good with that. As a matter of fact, I would be good with a bit of clitoral stimulation right now, if you could see your way clear, Master,” she said huskily.

“Stop that slave, or I’ll zap your cunt good.” He smiled to himself as he felt her body stiffen and her heart miss a beat.

“Why are you not clean shaven, Slave? I prefer a smooth well oiled cunt. I can assess your state of arousal better that way and I like to see your cunt juice leak out over soft flesh rather than see it get all matted in pubic hair.”

“I can do that for you now, Master, if you wish,” she said. “Master, Jim just never mentioned what he wanted in that regard so I just kept my pubic hair short and neat.”

“While you do that, let me develop a daily routine for us. It’s part of my military heritage to be orderly.

“Bring the razor and cream in here, I want to supervise your shave while I tell you how we will organize each day.”

When she was seated and spread wide for her cunt shave, Mike wasted no time in detailing the daily drill.

“First, I want you to come to my house at 9 a.m. each day through the back entrance for your daily physical training on my workout equipment. I will teach you how to get the most from your workout time. You’ll do some warm up calisthenics, then workout with a group of free weights to develop those body parts that need to be strengthened. Then, you will do either the step master or do a big run on my treadmill.

“Your clothes for this work will be good gym white shoes and low socks, a white sport bra, and these white, cotton, thong panties. But, bring a pair of four inch heels and some stay-up hose for those times when I’ll want you nude.”

Paige started to ooze cunt fluid and Mike saw it begin to mix with the shaving cream on the outer edges of her labia.

“Second, after the gym room workout, you will suck my cock. I will train you how to deep throat me. I have a whipping machine that will whip your ass while you suck me and it can be turned so that it can whip your tits when I fuck your ass. It’s my intent to fuck your ass every Monday and Friday.

“But lucky slave, after you get fucked I will massage your body all over in the nude, on my own personal massage table each Friday. Not only will that be good for your conditioning, but it will give me a chance to find out the effect of the gym work on the various parts of your body that need attention.

“Third, I am going to train you to have an orgasm on my terms. That means you must not stimulate yourself at all; bring all of your dildos to my house so you can avoid the temptation.

“Fourth, from time-to-time, I will take you out in public to test your degree of submission to me. You will be expected to obey my commands no matter how unpleasant those commands may be to you.

“And, slave, you’ve done a nice job shaving. You got all around your cunt and ass. Good job. Keep it that way. Don’t let any stubble grow.

“Okay! That’s it for today here. I want you to spend the rest of the day, until an hour before Jim gets home, at Mr. Charles Spa and Salon downtown. Here is $500. I’ve called Charles and he is expecting you.

“I’ve told him to make sure he gives you a great hair style; one that makes you appear less youthful and to help you with your make up to give you a more sophisticated look. When you get home, you should look great. Watch what you wear or don’t wear. Be anticipatory and think like a slave thinks because that’s what you are. Don’t forget it!

“This will be your first test under my tutelage. Don’t let me down or you will pay the price. Remember, I can be ferocious and I will hurt you!”

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Paige looked smashing when Jim got home; practically a new woman. Her clean shaven cunt was a sight to behold as were her nipples which were adorned with silver tit clips. Her legs were sheathed in black latex boots, on five inch heels. The latex sheath had a side zipper and went from her foot almost to her cunt. She was the embodiment of a sexy, svelte, and submissive girl.

She was standing tall, tits extended, core thin and rippled, back arched so her cunt showed between her trim, upturned ass cheeks. Jim was impressed.

“Get me a drink, slave,” he said, not knowing what to make of Paige’s apparent transformation for the moment.

“Yes, Master, coming right up, on the double. Please have a seat in the living room, Sir. I’ll be right back to you. I‘ve even made a little something tasty for you to go with your drink, Sir.”

As she walked away, her hips swayed as they never had before. It was almost like he was watching a naked runway model strut her stuff.

When she placed the drink and snack down on the table beside him, she assisted him remove his coat. Then she began to massage his shoulders. Jim, couldn’t get over what he was seeing and feeling. He knew that if this new behavior would keep up for the rest of the night, he would have to call Mike and find out what he did to effect such a speedy change in Paige.

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“Mike, this is Jim, what the hell did you do to Paige?” he asked. “Not that I’m complaining, but something has happed to this girl. She has been as compliant and erotic as any time in her life with me. I never knew I would get such a turn-on just looking at a shaved cunt. How did you bring about such a sudden change? And, who paid for the makeover?”

“Jim. Geeze, it’s almost eleven p.m. Couldn’t this wait?

“I’m really glad you see some change in Paige. I think the best is yet to come however. We’ve got almost two months left in our agreement.

“The makeover is my gift to you actually. I’m having fun so far. As you might remember I was looking for something to do and for some good entertainment; with Paige, I get both.

“But, keep me posted regarding how you feel about Paige. And, if she ever gives you reason to be disappointed in her behavior, tell her you will tell me. Then, I’ll fix it with shocking results. Good night, Jim. Enjoy the girl and think of me pal.”

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Paige arrived at Mike’s place the next morning as she had been directed. She looked smart in her workout togs and arrived carrying a bag in which there were several pairs of high heels. To be sure she was on time.

He had already completed his own morning exercises and still showed the warm glow which resulted from the exertion of his workout. His sweat streaked body suggested that he was not going to be any easier on her than he was on himself.

Once in his workout room, Mike got right to the heart of the schedule for the day and familiarized her with the various pieces of equipment there.

He demonstrated a series of warm up calisthenics which she would be expected to do each day before hitting the free weights. And, he told her that she would be responsible for keeping a log of her repetitions for each activity each day and adding repetitions until he was satisfied with her progress. When he was satisfied with a particular regimen, he would then change it to so that she would get the benefit of working on some other aerobic activity or to develop some other set of muscles.

After her free weight workout she would then run on the tread mill for at least thirty minutes. After that drill she would disrobe and kneel in the middle of the weight room. As a rule, he would critique her performance as she went along and then critique the entire workout at which time he would send her to the shower, his shower, to clean up.

After she had dried off, applied her makeup and fixed her hair, as she had been directed by Mr. Charles, Paige was expected to return to the weight room for further instructions. Some days were set aside for him to use her mouth and others were set aside for him to use her ass. This was a Tuesday, a “mouth” day.

Mostly he guided her ministrations of his cock by pulling, tugging, and squeezing her nipples. Based on her first experience taking his cum in her mouth he decided she needed additional training immediately in the oral department.

Mike blindfolded her and retrieved a six and a half inch long rubber dildo to assist him improve her deep throat skills. He lubed it well with a gel which had no smell or odor and only had a faint level of obvious viscosity. He pulled her head backward by her hair so that her neck was straight and perpendicular to the ground. He then slid the penis shaped dildo into her mouth.

Paige struggled as she tried to keep breathing through her nose. In fact, she struggled so much that Mike finally slapped her across the face and told her to concentrate on the task at hand, which was to take the full length of the rubber cock down her throat all the way.

Getting the faux cock past her gag reflex was a daunting challenge for her. But, he pushed her on through many repetitions until she finally was able to hold her breath for about twenty seconds and take the whole thing without gagging.

On the next try, Mike was convinced that Paige could beat her all time best. “Slave, Paige, take my cock all the say down your throat as fast as you can.

“Now hold it, Slave! Hold it! Hold it! Taste it!”

Mike erupted in her and she held him tightly around his hips as she worked to keep his cum inside her. He told her that the last effort was a good start.

He wanted to take her to lunch, but she said all she had nothing to wear. Now that she was at his home, her wardrobe consisted of her high heels. Mike found a kaki shirt, XL, and threw it to her and told her to put it on. “Not bad,” he thought, she sure showed a lot of leg.

“You sure have nice legs lady, might as well show them off,” he said. “I’m going to take you for a ride, Slave. Let’s get to the garage.”

Paige was anxious to say the least. What was he going to do with her in public with only a shirt on?

“Before I let you get in the car, Slave, I want you to stand about two feet in front of the garage and spread ‘em. Place your hands on the wall just a foot or so above your head. Pretend I’m a police officer and I’m going to search you for drugs. That’s the position I want you in,” he said.

When she was in position straining in her high heels, he reached under the loose fitting shirt and slid his hands up and over her rather full and firm breasts; she loved it. He attacked her nipples and pulled them until Paige buckled under the strain. Mike groped her cunt and determined that she was a sloppy mess so it was easy for him to slide his fingers deep inside her and stroke her slippery clit. It wasn’t long before she began to moan. To quiet her, he spanked her petite ass hard ten times with his rough hands.

“Ya know Slave, that I think you have great legs. But I also think your tits are magnificent. I’m not just blowing smoke up your ass; they really are spectacular and all the more so because of your well developed rib cage and core. Don’t get a swelled head now. Just know that I appreciate a lovely body when I see one, or feel one, or fuck one. Show these tits off when you can!”

“Please, Master, let me cum. Your hands are making me so fucking hot. Please let me cum. I’m so fucking ready; so ready,” she mumbled. “I’ll do anything you want me to, Sir, just please let me cum. Spank me longer and harder but, please let me cum.”

“No, slave. Just get in my car right now, and lift the shirt tails up over your waist,” he commanded.

When Paige was in the passenger seat, he told her to open the buttons of the shirt, spread her legs wide and to keep her arms at her sides. He slid into drivers side of his small two-seater, raised the garage door with the opener, started the car, and began the drive out of the neighborhood.

“Dear god,” she thought, “please don’t let anyone see me like this. I’ll die!”

“Slave, I want you to pull on your nipples so I can see them. Pull on them; make them long and hard.”

“Now hold your tits up with your hands so I can feel how hard your nipple are; how hard you’ve made them. Keep those tits out so I can play with them.”

“Are your nipples hard, Slave,” he asked.

“Yes, Master, they’re very hard,” Paige answered shyly.

“Do you think they are ready for me to play with, Slave?” he asked.

“Yes, Master, I’ve gotten them very hard for you Sir, I just hope you won’t humiliate me here in town, Sir.”

Mike reached across to her and felt her nipples with his right hand. He just barely grazed them; but he kept it up, and tantalized them over and over again.

“Now Slave, dip your fingers, from both hands, in your cunt and tell me how wet your are.”

“Master Mike, I am very aroused and very nervous. I think I’m dripping on your car seat, Sir. May I cum now, Please?”

Mike was having a grand time with Paige who thought she might pass out from embarrassment.

“No, you may not cum! In fact, I want you to get the nipple clips that are in the glove compartment and put them on yourself then button up but keep the shirt above your waist,” he ordered.

Soon he found a fast food joint where he ordered a light lunch for each of them from the take-out window. The young service worker looked into the roadster but since it was very low to the ground she wasn’t exactly sure what to make of what she saw. She didn’t make a fuss for which Paige was grateful; especially grateful since her nipples were still hard and her cunt was dripping so profusely that her fluid was running down her inner thigh onto the car seat.

After Mike paid the tab, he took Paige to a local recreation area where he made her take the lunches to a rather public table. She sat on the cold, concrete, bench where they ate. He sat on the opposite side of the table and watched her closely. He could see the steel nipple clips poking from the fabric of the shirt.

“Okay, now, Slave. I don’t suppose you ever had a climax in public in the day light, have you?” he asked.

“Oh, Master, Mike, no I sure haven’t. You aren’t going to tell me to masturbate right here, are you? Suppose someone sees me?”

“Yes, Slave. That’s what you are going to do. It wasn’t that long ago that you were begging me to let you cum, so I want you to rub your excitable clit right now. I want to see how you react to a very public display of your subservience; your willingness to comply with my orders. Start now!”

Paige reached between her legs and in no time at all she brought herself to a rather outrageous orgasm. Mike looked her in the eye to telegraph that it was ok for her to cum again. She did.

“Very well done, Slave. I’m proud of you. You did seemed a bit reluctant at first, but then you got down to business rather nicely. What was going through your mind that took you from a reluctant slave to a compliant one?” he asked.

“Master, a lot went through my mind. First, I knew that if I didn’t obey you, I’d probably get another dose from that mean shock machine you introduced me to yesterday. And, I really did want to please you. And, I thought that having a public orgasm was better than no orgasm at all.

“Those are the thoughts I dealt with in the brief flash of time before I gathered myself to the task at hand, so to speak,” she said.

Just them, a park ranger drove up and approached the table. “Is everything alright here miss?” he asked.

Mike interjected, “Officer, sure, everything is just fine, we were just about ready to leave as a matter of fact.”

“Sir, I addressed my question to the lady here. Let her answer for herself.”

“Sure officer, everything is fine; no problems,” Paige said quickly. She was mortified by what was taking place.

“I thought I saw you in some physical distress just a while ago and thought you might need help. Are you sure there isn’t anything I can do for you, not necessarily as an officer of the law, but just as a kindly, young, healthy, male.”

Paige’s heart beat started to rise as did the blush in her cheeks. It sounded like a combination offer of sex and a bribe. She was certain that he had seen her masturbate. The officer was really handsome and from her position in front of him, he looked exceedingly well hung.

“No Sir, nothing I need right now. But, thanks for the offer. Perhaps at another time,” she was glowing with erotic excitement.

“Well, I patrol this area many times during the day, so if you are ever here and need help, just wave me down.”

The officer took a rear ward step and laid his meaty hand on Paige’s back only to realize the truth of what he had suspected; she was not wearing a bra. He also could see the swell of her breasts and the outline of the nipple clips from his vantage point behind her. The officer winked at Mike knowingly and bid his farewell.

“I’m proud of you again, Slave. You handled all that very well.

“I’ll get you back to the neighborhood and let you go home,” Mike told her as they walked to his car. On the way, I want you in handcuffs. They are in the glove compartment too. Open up the front of the shirt again and slip them chrome beauties on behind your back. I still have some entertainment on my mind.”

When she was settled and her hands cuffed behind her, Mike began to fondle the nipple clips as he drove away from the park. Paige, was in a bewildered state of mind. Her nipples hurt, but she was very aroused and she didn‘t want him to stop what he was doing to her tits. And she knew, even without asking, that he would deny any request for relief. She just took deep breaths and enjoyed what he was doing to her.

As they arrived at his home, he drove the car into the garage and helped he out; her arms still cuffed behind her. He removed the clips and cuffs and crushed her to his chest. He bit each tender nipple and handled her cunt roughly. She let him have his way as her arms stayed placidly at her sides.

He finally released her and said, “Tonight, you will need to be on your best behavior for your Master. Spend time fixing your hair and makeup so you dazzle Master Jim just like you did yesterday. And dress the part of his slave, which you are of course. Drive him wild! Tomorrow, when you arrive for your workout with me, wear the same outfit as you did today. ”

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“Mike, this is Jim again. I know it’s just about midnight, but I needed to tell you how impressed I am with dear Paige again tonight. I can’t believe the change in her just in the past several days. Whatever you are doing with her, just keep it up, pal.”

“My friend,” Mike said, “let me first say, that Paige is quite a girl. She really wants to be your obedient sex partner. But, I’ve learned a few things about you and how you deal with her in just a very brief period which prompts me to offer a few suggestions.

“Paige understands herself well enough to know that only when her desires are the same as your desires will she be happy and at peace. To reach that place of peace, service, and devotion, she needs to know exactly what you demand of her. Ignorance of your needs and desires, in her case, is not bliss. She can’t read your mind.

“So, I want you to tell her exactly what you what her to do and how to do it. This is a continuing process and will take time because you can’t tell her everything all at once. And, in reality, your demands will probably change over time. But, start the process now and really behave authoritatively. She needs a dominant partner. Make her understand that you are really the boss. You will be happier and so will she.

“Next, make sure she knows there are consequences for not measuring up to the potential she has as your sex partner. When I say consequences, I mean serous and heavy discipline intended to bring about the behavior you expect; a warning, so to speak.

“For the next weeks, I will administer the punishment that is implied in that warning. Let her know that you will send her to me for that discipline when she disappoints you. In a very short time, I assure you, she will be the best slave girl you can imagine.

“Now, I’ve got to get some rest. Please only call me if Paige misbehaves in grievous way during the coming weeks. I’ll be expecting her in the morning and will continue with my special brand of behavior and body modification.”

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Mike worked with Paige every week day for the next seven weeks. Her muscle tone improved significantly as had her endurance. No one could ask for more perfect legs; and in heels, those legs were to die for. Her core was rippled as were her arms and back. Mike was proud of her for all the effort she put into his regime. And, she was proud of herself taking justifiable pride in her body which she posed from every angle in front of her mirror each day.

Her willingness to service him with her ass was also impressive. She was certainly easier to penetrate in recent weeks and seemed to look forward to the action there.

Her capacity to take him down in her throat was significant. A few times she actually had her own climax while he was deep in her throat.

She had obeyed all of his commands even when he took her on his public outings. She coped with the embarrassment like a trooper.

Mike loved Friday’s. That was his day to fuck her ass and to give her a full body massage. His massages left nothing on her body untouched. She was not allowed to say anything to him as he moved his hands all over her.

First, he started with her on her back. He rubbed oils on her feet, legs, hips, cunt, core, tits, neck and face. By the time he had oiled her cunt she was super ready to climax, but he refused her the release he knew she wanted. He ministered to her slick clit over and over again. And, she knew that if she as much as quivered, she would taste the zapper.

He then turned her over and again worked up from her feet to her neck. But he always paid special attention to her ass. Frequently, he inserted a thin finger of fresh ginger root and let her suffer the hot discomfort it provided. It made her crazy for a good fuck.

She had not given him any reason to bring the TENS unit out again for disciplinary reasons until one night just a day before the two month trial period under Mike was to come to an end. Then he got a call from Jim.

Apparently, Paige had slipped up again on the household bill payments and Jim didn’t know what to do. He was so mad he almost couldn’t talk straight.

“Mike, Jim here. I need your help with Paige right away. I told her that if she didn’t toe the line, I would have to contact you to straighten things out. She screwed up big time with the household bills, and it might have been intentional. I need your intervention with her.

“I have to say, she really looks great, and we both owe you a big debt of gratitude. Whatever you did a few months ago really worked and I’ve been more involved with her and more dominant than ever before, however the wheels really just fell off yesterday. What do you suggest?”

“Well, it’s pretty late, Jim. If you don’t think all this can wait till morning, send her over to my place now. What is your take on the timing of all this?”

“I’m pretty upset with her and if it’s okay with you, I’ll send her over now. It’s dark so she’ll arrive at your back door, nude, and barefoot on the run.”

Mike was waiting for her at the door and let her in quickly. She had run hard. He could see the muscles in her long legs straining and the bounce of her tits. “Rather an enjoyable sight,” he thought.

“Get in here right now you dim-witted, slave. Get into the workout room and kiss my feet.”

Paige knew her way around Mike‘s house and didn’t have to be told twice. She was on her knees, face to the floor, when he got there. She crawled to him and wrapped her arms around his ankles and kissed his feet in recognition of her very vulnerable and submissive status.

“Slave, I’m going to hurt you for your poor performance and for the fact that you really disappointed your Master and husband. But first, I’ll listen to your side of the story. Present yourself to me and start talking,” he said.

Paige, stood up but kept her eyes downcast. She thrust out her tits with her arms behind her head, spread her legs, and bowed her back provocatively.

“Master, Mike, I have a terrible confession to make,” she said in a weak, young girls voice. “Yesterday, I realized for the first time that our two month trial period was coming to an end and I was upset by my awareness that you would no longer be training me.”

Her voice strengthened and she continued.

“I’ve gotten used to your hands on my body and your cock in my mouth and ass. I’ve gotten used to your commands and I don’t want you to stop using me.

“What I’m saying is that I look forward to the punishment you give me. I didn’t realize it because I’ve been so fulfilled and I can’t get it out of my mind that you used that terrible electric gizmo on me and nearly made me cum just from the pain you inflicted. I decided I wanted more of that.

“Please Sir, I confess that I screwed up big time in not paying Master’s bills on time. I let one get way over our limit. But, now that I think about it, I may have done it on purpose so I could continue my training under you.

“I’m not even sure that I’m afraid of the damned electric gadget you have any more. It was not fun initially, but you did make me cum. It was a different sensation and stimulated my erotic nerves; it was so powerful, intense really. I’ve never experienced anything like it before. It was a good orgasm for sure.”

“It doesn’t matter at this point,” Mike said. “You will be punished for your poor performance and disrespect for Master Jim! Now put on a pair of those heels you left here last time,” he said harshly. “And, put that blindfold on while you’re at it.”

When she was blindfolded and again standing in front of him, he set the TENS unit at the four level out of a possible ten. Instead of having the setting also on discharge and zapping her, he merely pulled the trigger. It made the identifiable “click” sound but didn’t actually fire.

To Paige, it brought back the memory of her first experience with the unit; a spasm and a jolting pain. She recoiled without even being hit.

Mike felt the wetness in her cunt and the engorgement of her clit. She was aroused.

“You know, Slave, Paige, you should be the poster girl for the pain slut society. You get your jollies from pain. I’ve been working with your for two months and I never realized that. In reality, I’ve let you down. I’m sorry for that. I should have spanked you, whipped you, tortured you, and zapped you every day. You’d have like that wouldn’t you?”

“No, sir…I… I… ”

She never got a chance to finish the thought. He aimed the TENS unit probes at her cunt and this time he did energize the unit send a jolt into her. She buckled at the knees, screaming but she did not fall down. He recognized immediately that he should have gagged her first but it was far too late at that point.

“That’s just the beginning for you, pain slut,” he yelled. He reset the unit to a three level and pointed the probes at her nipples.. One; two; in succession.

Paige, fell to her knees this time but did not ask for mercy. On the contrary, she seemed to be in the throes of a gigantic orgasm. Her face took on a bright glow and her nipples stood hard and firm. Her hands reached toward her clit.

“Don’t touch yourself, Slave! Don’t touch yourself; I mean it,” he yelled. “It’s late, so crawl to one of those mats over there; it will be your bed for the night. No covers for a very troublesome slave tonight. Remove your blindfold but not your heels. See you in the morning when I’ll teach you a thing or two about yourself.

“Ya know, I rather like the idea of being your Master,” he said as he walked out the door.

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Mike slept the sleep of angels. When he awoke he had a strong erection. “Paige!” he shouted at the top of his lungs. “Slave, Paige, crawl to me, right now.”

She arrived, somewhat groggy, at his bed side not knowing what to do.

“Get up here and service my prick with your mouth. Service me well. Amuse me with your tongue. Take me deep as I’ve taught you.”

He pulled on her nipples hard in an effort to drive his prick deeper into her mouth. She groaned but she took all of him and swallowed all of his ejaculate like the cock-sucking pro she was getting to be.

“Now run back to your house and help your Master get breakfast and see that he gets off to work in a better mood than he was in last night. When he leaves, get your sorry ass back here in the double, and I don‘t care if you don‘t have any clothes,” he ordered.

Within the hour, she was back at Mike’s house on her knees once again.

“Good slave,” he said patting her head. “What did Master Jim say to you?”

“Sir, Master Jim, seemed happy to see me, but he still appeared to be miffed. I tried to make it up to him with a quick fuck which he did appear to appreciate. But, he told me to be on my best behavior and to pay attention to what you had in store for me today.”

“Well, what I have in store for you is more of the shock treatment you love so much. I will get a full measure of your ass, and, you will get your share of orgasms. Stand up and spread ’em. Here’s your blindfold. Put it on again. Hold your tits in your hands and offer them to me for punishment.”

“Master, if it pleases you, I beg you to punish my tits. They are so sensitive and seem to be attached directly to my clit. Hurt them and remind me of my lowly status as a pain slut, Sir.”

He shot her twice on each nipple with the TENS unit set at level three. Her face became twisted and contorted but her legs clamped together tightly, one over the other, as if she was pressing her clit to orgasm. While still standing in her very high heels, she screamed the scream of a women in the throes of an overwhelming orgasm.

Mike took her to one of the mats in the room and had her kneel, wide spread. Her cunt juices spilled down her legs and her body still trembled in the after glow of her release. “Now, present your body for inspection, slave, and hold it until you are released.”

His fingers worked her body relentlessly. He pulled and fondled. She begged him over and over to fuck her ass. But, she stayed in position for well over an hour while he amused himself at her expense. The he wiped his cock over her lips and she took him again.

“What do you think we need to do with you, Slave Paige?” he asked. “Your master can’t be home when you need him most, and he doesn’t seem to be naturally inclined to being an Alpha male. Unless circumstances change, it wouldn’t be right for me to keep training you. What’s the answer here?”

“Sir, I’ve been asking myself that same question. I do have some ideas but certainly, Master Jim would have to agree.”

“Don’t tell me now, slave. Wait for another twenty four hours, then on Saturday morning I’ll come over for coffee and we can have a chat on that very point. In the meantime, I‘ll be thinking of various options, and I want you to be thinking of additional ways to move forward. Tell Master Jim that I want to talk to him at that time.”

With those words, he jolted her three more times at the four level, once in her cunt, and one more time on each nipple. She couldn’t hold her position any longer and rolled into a full fetal position onto the mat. She stayed that way until he kicked her in the ribs and told her to go home and shower.

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“Jim I want you to know that you Slave, Paige has the stuff of which good slave girls are made. She can be manipulative and top from the bottom if you let her. Her main strength is that she is in love with you and knows that she has a very submissive personality. And, she likes pain.

“She is also a very attractive girl and looks great, don’t ya think? Her attention to her appearance has improved and she has added definition to her already superb body in the past two months. Her back and arms are stronger and her waist is smaller. And, let’s not forget those well proportioned legs. She has also made progress in applying her submissiveness to the demands of a dominant man.

“Let’s talk about where to go from here in her training. I think we agree that’s why we are here this morning.”

“Yes, and I have some good ideas,” Paige interjected.

Mike swung around to face her. His hand came up lightening fast and he slapped her flat across the face. His fingers left marks on her cheek. Paige was startled. No one had ever struck her that way before.

“Slave, you apparently don’t know your place here. You were not asked to give us you opinion and we don’t expect you to offer any until you are asked to do so. So just shut up,” Mike shouted.

Paige was distraught and took on a sullen, sulky, appearance. The men could see her mood shift, it was apparent in her body language.

“Don’t you dare pout, you insolent, disrespectful, slave. You were out of line and you know it!” Mike barked. “Now go to another room with a pen and paper and write these words legibly: I will not express my opinion without my Master’s permission.

“And, write it over and over again, without mistakes, fifty times. Then come back and give it to Master Jim. Offer it to him courteously, with two subservient hands. Do you understand, Slave?”

Paige scurried away with a tear in her eye, as if she had been chastened by Lucifer himself.

When Paige was out of ear shot, Mike spoke to him about his own behavior as a dominant male, responsible for a very special submissive girl.

“Jim, I’ve told you before, you’ve got to exert your authority and command over this cute morsel of a girl. She will manage you if you don’t manage her. She is looking for a strict disciplinarian because basically she’s a pain slut. Keep her busy thinking of how she can please you or if you run out of ideas simply keep her in bondage. Hurt her and she’ll love you for it. Don’t spare the whippings and spankings.

“And, share her with other men and women if it’s to your benefit.”

“When she gets back I want you to tell her directly several things you demand of her. I’ve mentioned the need for you to do this before, so if you need to emphasize a particular demand just repeat yourself while I’m here. I have a few ideas too. Then we can ask Paige what suggestions she might have, but don’t let her get the upper hand.”

Jim got the point, and when Paige handed him her papers, he took them from her. She offered them to him with her eyes down cast and fell to her knees while he was reading.

“Slave, this is unacceptable,” he said sharply. “It is way too sloppy. You made too many mistakes which you tried to cover over. The entire project must be perfect before you hand it to me. If you make an error, start over with a clean piece of paper. Now, do it right!”

Paige scampered off a bit stunned.

“Well done, brother. You can be a strict if you put your mind to it,” Mike said.

“Keep up the good work with her; she will actually be happier if you are confident and commanding. I suggest you set a few defined routines for her each day; let’s call them Paige’s Rituals.”

This time when she returned, Paige’s work was flawless. Jim told her to sit flatfooted on her heels, knees spread apart, tits up. He knew that this position would stress her knee joints and hamstrings and he was determined to keep her hurting that way for a good while.

“Master Mike and I were just talking about establishing a few daily rituals for you, slave. Routines we think will be good for you and which you’ll need to follow each day unless given other direction. Pay attention!

“The first routine will be to continue with your physical workouts as you have been doing at Master Mike‘s. But, you’ll do them here at home. I, for my part, will purchase the workout equipment Master Mike thinks we need. I’ll place the order today and it all will be delivered soon, perhaps even by Monday.

“Master Mike will come on a random basis and check on your progress and to see if your doing everything correctly.

“Next, I want you to start whipping yourself one hundred time each day, with a multi-tailed hand flogger, all over your body while you look into a mirror. Pay particular attention to your ass, cunt and legs. Get your skin red but don’t break your skin in the process. Don’t slack off; a self inflicted beating can be erotic and instructive as you think about how you can serve me better.

“Read a story or part of an erotic novel each day and think if there are any ideas in these stories which we can adopt or which apply to you. I’ll expect a report on your readings frequently and I won’t give you any notice. Just be ready.

“Keep your cunt clean shaven and keep your hair and makeup in top shape.

“Do you have any ideas Master, Mike?”

“Yes, I have one. Paige needs to write another reminder sentence each day for two more months regarding her bill paying duties. Something like: I am responsible for paying the household bills correctly each month without fail or I will be punished.

“And, one more routine, if it appeals to you Jim. Instruct Paige to insert a vibrating cunt and ass plug about one half hour before you get home each day and place a set of nipple clips on as well for the same time period.

“She should meet you naked and kneeling when you arrive home and declare her unyielding devotion and submission to you each day when you finally allow her to speak.”

“Sounds good, Mike. As it is said, let it be so!” Jim ordered.

“Now, Slave Paige, what do you have to say?”

“Master, I know I was insubordinate when I piped up without permission and, Master Mike, as usual, your corrective slap was fitting. Thank you, Sir.

“If it pleases you Master Jim, you might want me to start a daily slave journal regarding my activities and thoughts. That’s my idea for now.”

“Master Mike, you are a good neighbor,” Jim said. “I appreciate your help with this unworthy slave girl. Feel free to come over and use her as you see fit as often as you need her. You don’t need my permission. Because you are such a good neighbor, I am ordering Paige to service you from now on in all the ways she services me.”

Mike looked surprised, but said, “I really appreciate your generosity, Jim. Thank you.”

Paige was on the brink of an orgasm when she heard those words. She thought to herself, “Yes, Master Mike, you are a very, very, good neighbor.”

As Mike turned to leave the house he gave her a lecherous wink in a way that Jim could not see. Paige’s nipples become rigid and her cunt muscles convulsed non- stop.

Mike and Paige, the two good neighbors who had gotten to know each other well in a special way, had communicated clearly about the future without saying a word.

The End

Author’s Note # 1: The above story is my 15th in the past several months and the 7th in January alone. Most of my stories took a lot of time and effort to write and now I’m ready for a sabbatical. For this writer, inventing new D/s plot lines, twists, and scenes isn’t easy. Nor is it effortless to come up with new ideas for consensual, realistic punishment and humiliation. While that is true, I hasten to add that it has also been fun for me.

Author’s Note # 2: Some of my reviewers have suggested that I just continue to add chapters to my earlier pieces. While I never rush an ending to a story, at times I just can’t maintain the enthusiasm needed to develop a character or a plot any further. And, at times I want to leave some mystery to the characters or to the plot. If you have comments and ideas for further stories I’d like to hear from you during my hiatus at biggreek100@aol.com .

Author’s Note # 3: Thousands of you have at least glanced at my stories, but very few have reviewed them (less than .02%). I wonder why that is? I’m not looking for good reviews, which most have been so far, I’m just asking why there aren’t more of them. Is the problem with the review process itself? Does it need to be more user friendly?

I’ll be back!

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