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Death wish

Chapter 1

Death Wish

Death Wish

 

 

 

1.       The prologue

 

The reverend ended his funeral speech and invited all participants for a coffee in the parish room.  Jim Crowley kissed his wife gently. “Sorry Jane, I want to stay here alone with HER”. Jane nodded but she was worried. Her husband, an early retired Marines corps officer, who went through the first Gulf war, Afghanistan and many dangerous special missions was an unbeatable character, but now during the last days he didn’t stop crying. Emily their daughter was number 8 in the list of a serial killer.

 

Everybody went to the parish and Jim stayed alone at the cemetery, crying. The FBI did not even allow the families to see their children. “I cannot allow it. I understand your feelings but I can tell you that it is not nice to see, even when you have seen war horrors, don’t forget this is your daughter.” had said the officer. In the press they have learned more. Each victim had a cross burned into their flesh on their forehead. The body was of course raped, but worse severely mutilated, such as cut off of nipples, labia, clitoris and other cruelties.

 

He took one of the last photographs of Emily in his hands, kissed the paper and started again crying. He did not even realise that a man was standing next to him. “Mister Crowley?” he asked. Jim looked up. “I’m Dr Edward Hobson  - “Please go away I do not need a doctor” replied Jim rather unfriendly. – “I’m not here as a doctor” he said, “but as the father of Laura, number 7 of the list. I know how you feel right away” – “Sorry.. Doctor.. Mr” – “Oh say Edward or Ed” – “Sorry Ed, apologise, I did not want to be rude  - “Oh I know, don’t worry, do you mind I sit down? -  “Jim moved a little further.

 

“Look, the only thing we can do for our children and those who risk to come next, is action” said the doctor friendly “It means you need courage. I know you are a former Marine and I know you have courage. It is best present you can give to Emily” Jim looked up questioned “What do you mean?”   Ed replied  “I will not bother you now, I have a plan, but now your wife Jane needs you over there. This is my phone and address. When you feel ready the next days, please call me  and we will talk together  you, Jane, my wife Karen, my brother John and myself”  Jim took the business card. They stood up he grabbed Ed’s hand shake it with emotion: “Thank you. You are right, this is war”

 

 

2.       The plans

 

They were together at the home of Dr Hobson. He presented first Charles Hobson his brother. “ Charles is a former FBI man who started several years ago a private detective office. Laura was nearly a daughter to him. He has 2 sons and Laura was the only girl in the family. He still has connections within the FBI and since the death of Laura he spend all his time for private research. Tell me were you stand Charles” .

Charles looked around, “Yes Laura was my niece, a lovely girl. I can feel Mr and Mrs Crowley how you feel today. To be to the point, I studied the 8 crimes to find similar points and call it logics. I found already a lot, but with your daughter he started already to make ‘hiding mistakes’. At this point I can say that the chances are 75 pct that I could find him. Of course some luck and coincidences need to be there. It is important as apparently he killed the girls in phases starting with the full moon, and then with 1 or 2 weeks between the next 2 girls probably depending his ability to catch a victim. The next one should be between now and 2 weeks. If we do not find him we will have to wait until the next full moon.“

“And what when you catch him?” asked Jim. Ed answered: “You know that in this state the death penalty is suspended due to some activists. So, he will certainly obtain a life sentence, but in the comfort of the prisons. This is not acceptable. We need our own justice. It is important we catch him alive. The trial is not even required as 8 girls mean 10 too much. He has to suffer with the same or similar as he has done to our children. It will be the revenge we can give in name of our daughters. ”    Everybody was nodding positively.  Ed continued: “We have here a strong team: Charles did already a wonderful job, I’m a surgeon and obtaining medical stuff we could need is easy. Karen, my wife is a former nurse. Jim a combat specialist and I understood that Jane is still doing some judo or karate?”- “ In fact Judo” she answered -  “We have to prepare ourselves to have a team which can catch the monster, ones we found him and the rest we work out during the next days” – Jim fell in “ Ed, thanks that you talked to me at the cemetery, I believe that I have done enough missions even dangerous ones all over the world to know that this one is an easy one. Anyway, I will get weapons and some operational items, Jane will take your measurements to buy the required black clothing as used by military for the missions. We will need some communication devices. Within 2 days all will be ready.”  - “Great” said Ed. Karen added “I do the necessary to have our alibis. A couple with victim nr 3 would like to participate but the man walks with a cane due to an accident years ago.   Don’t forget that we will not render the “monster” to the authorities. Important for us is that we further talk to NOBODY and I mean NOBODY about this mission. Is that clear for us” – Jim smiled “I can only agree, you know that for some missions even Jane was not knowing anything.”  Jane said :”I have a question, will we execute him once he suffered?”  - Ed replied griming: “ We planned much better, but lets go into the details now and we come to this particular point”

They started to discuss during the full evening preparing all the details.

 

 

3.       Discovered

 

4 days later:  Charles had analysed every detail of the FBI reports. He had still friends and ex-colleagues in the house who gave him information and access. The monster had chosen victims between 16 and 20 years old of the different colleges and high schools of the town. It seemed that he did return again into the same order. So following this logic the next victim should be at the Catholic college, the same as victim 4.  That victim was kidnapped in a rather quite avenue in a district considered as safe,  close to the college. Charles had turned around in the whole area he believed that this street was ideal for this purpose. There was no reason why he should change Emily has been kidnapped in the same street as 3.  So he had parked his car and was still writing down details of the area.

 

At ones he noticed a grey closed van, parked on the other side and a guy did take a metal cage out of it with a very young kitten. He closed the van, looked around, and went with the cage in the direction of a 16 or 17 years old dark blond girl in college uniform. When they crossed each other the girl of course was interested in the little kitten. The guy started talk opened the cage and took the kitten he gave to the girl. Then he showed his van and they both went to the van. He opened the back door, showed something in it, he helped the girl to step in “Jesus,” Charles said  she simply goes inside with a perfect stranger!”  Meanwhile the guy went in, closed the back door. It took several minutes, the door opened again and the guy came out, closed firmly this time with the key and  went to the drivers place. He started the van and drove slowly away. Charles KNEW that this was his monster.  He started the car, looked in the mirror if the van was far enough made a U turn and followed the van at some distance, preferably with one or two cars between them. They drove quite a distance to the other side of the town in the suburbs.  The van went into a wood area with some residential houses and stopped at a house where he turned into the garage, which he opened with a telecommand. Charles parked his car as close as possible but hidden behind another car.  Went out but stayed on the side. Nothing happened  during 10 minutes, sudden the front door of the house opened, the guy came out looked around and walked to a car parked in front of the house and drove away.

 

Charles immediately went to the house, which was slightly isolated from the others as there were still 2 or 3 free parcels next to it. He entered on the side, turned around the house checked through some windows and opened with a small tool the kitchen door. He went quickly around took some digital photos, he opened a door, which gave access to the cellar. He was intrigued to see insulation material on walls and ceiling, so he went down. Charles could not believe what he saw: Chains on the wall, in the middle a genealogy chair, table and a bord  to the wall with photographs. He went closer… “Jezus!”   The bord had 8 photographs pinned on above each a number from 1 to 8 and beneath the name. Number 7 was Laura and 8 Emily. The girls were photographed probably death. They were naked in the chair, a black  burned cross on their forehead, bleeding nipples, canning strokes, bleeding vagina, open starring eyes and faces full of horror. Charles knew that he had to keep cool. He took some photographs and went up. He installed quickly a micro camera in a hidden place, checked with the portable unit if it was ok, and adjusted the angle and the lens. Went up and wanted to search the house further has he had not seen the girl yet. However he heard slamming the door of a car. He did not take any risk, checking everything was the same when he came in, and quickly went out through the kitchen door. Just in time as the monster was back home.

Through the woody part of the parcel next door he went back to his car. With his mobile he called Ed.  “Dr Hobson speaking” – “Ed?” – “Yes Charles?” – “Ed I have the monster” – “What, are you sure?”  - “Absolutely”. Then he told quickly in details the story. “OK” said Ed,         

“I will advise the team for an urgency meeting”

 

Charles switched on his hidden camera devise. The light was burning in the cellar, but it was empty. At ones there was some movement, it was the guy with the kidnapped girl. She was naked hand bound with a rope struggling but without success. He bended the girl over a wooden small table fixed in the floor, cut the rope and attached her hands to the table. The girl tried to smash him with her free hand, but a violent smash in her face from the guy stopped resistance and he attached the second hand. Then he attached her feet.  Her legs were spread; as such he could see her cunt.  The guy took off his jeans. He did not wear anything under. His cock was standing right up, probably exited by the whole struggle, he went behind her and put his cock into her cunt, he apparently entered her violently and raped the poor girl. Disgusted, he switched the system off and drove quickly to Ed’s house.

Meanwhile Jim and Jane did arrive already.  Charles told the whole story. “Look” he said “time is running quickly. We have to go into action tonight.”  Jane interfered “Is it quick enough to save the girl?”  - “Yes, because all the victims have been killed the 3rd day after the were kidnapped. First he plays with them. The mutilation did take place just before he killed them; this was a conclusion from the autopsy reports of which I have a copy. But anyway at this moment he will rape her, and impose her painful treatment. It is indeed the reason we have to handle quickly as we want to avoid her too much pain. But it is better to work when it is dark. We cannot risk a failure. He would kill the girl immediately” 

 

Charles drew a small map for everybody, he showed the digital photographs on the wider television screen, and provided several technical and operational details. Jim advised immediately his detailed action plans. He immediately had all of the team repeated the plans separately to check if the could remember every detail.

 

Charles was sent already back as he needed to monitor all out of his car. Karen did call the “alibi couple” while Ed, Jim and Jane packed the car put their black cloths on, except the head cover.  When they were ready both couples took their car and drove to the couple were they entered, leaving the cars well visible in the street. As the house was on a corner, they went out at the backside and took another car prepared for the purpose.

 

During the time that Charles was away, the guy continued with the poor girl. He took a cane and started spanking her on her bottom until the last red stripes showed some blood.  The girl screamed. Then he turned her around and with a whip he slashed her well formed breasts.

“Please stop you are hurting me” cried the girl. -  “Of course and there is more to follow young lady” he grinned – “Why? Why?” she asked. -  “Because you are a slut a whore” . He pinched one of her nipples. He had pleasure in hurting the naked girl.

 

“I will tell you what I’m going to do with you. You girls enjoy knowing!” he grinned sadly, “I will use your body, and do the same as with the others over there” showing the photos at the wall.  The girl looked with horror  No, you are going to kill me …”  - With his bad smile he said “This is a favour I do to you. You will be glad. You will ask me that I strangle you, as it will deliver you from hell!  Look this iron cross on the poke. With the little oven I will warm it up till the cross is red. I will mark you before you go to heaven.” – “You are a sick bastard” she shouted. This was enough to receive a slash in her face. He opened again his jeans dropped it down played with his penis to get it hard. He turned her around opened her bottom cheeks and without any lube, he entered violently in her ass. “Aaaaahhhhhhhiieiie” she cried.

 

  

 

4.       The task force strikes

 

They arrived at the house. Charles started the receiver of the hidden camera. When the image was clear they could see the girl naked and attached with wide spread legs to chair. He had a still his T-shirt and jeans. He was flogging the girl on her stomach.  “Bastard” said Karen.  Ed and Jim would go to the backdoor door and enter in the kitchen. Once inside, they would send a signal to Karen and Jane, who would ring the bell. Charles would stay in the car and monitor with the little spy camera and send signals to Ed’s receiver.

 

“Good luck” said Charles, and the four went to the house. The 2 men put on the head cover, with a blank flexible card they opened the door entered the kitchen and hided themselves behind the corner of the corridor close to the cellar door. The latter was closed, probably to hide the screams of the girl. Jim was used to such operations. He would go in action while Ed with a pistol in his hands would back up him if something was wrong. They send a signal to their wife’s and Charles that all was ok. Charles who monitored the cellar gave the final go ahead. Jane rang the doorbell.  Charles could follow what happened.  The guy seemed somewhat surprised, but immediately he gagged the girl, to avoid she would cry and he went on the stairs. A signal was send by Charles. Everybody was ready. Jim heard the guy opening the door, he came in the corridor. He closed the door carefully and shouted at the front door “Who is it?”   Jane answered outside, I have here a parcel for you sir  - “ A parcel?” he replied, staying close to the open kitchen door “ I didn’t order anything…” A that moment with to silent steps Jim was behind him, put his left arm around the guys neck and gave with his right fist a heavy kick against his temple. The guy did not even realise what happened and felt down on the floor. Jim jumped on him, handcuffed him and put another at his ankles. The guy was unconscious for a moment.  Ed ran to the front door and opened for the wife’s, who entered. Jim being a professional in this matter took no risk. With Ed’s pistol in hands he went quickly through the house, checked each room, opened each cabinet, looked under the beds to check that they were alone. When all was secured they send a signal to Charles, who would stay outside to monitor the house.

 

Ed checked if the guy was still alive. He meanwhile woke up puzzled. Jim took him with his handcuffs, they opened the cellar door and Jim without any mercy pulled the guy down the steps of the cellar. He threw the guy on the side and gave him a heavy trap with his foot. The gagged girl looked with horror the 4 black masked persons coming down.  Jane and Karen went to the girl so terrorised that you could hear screaming even with the gag in her mouth. Ed did not want that they loosed the attachments.  He went to the girl caressed her hair and spoke gently to her: “Hello, calm down, you are safe now. We came here to free you. I will take first the gag out of you mouth, so do not scream, ok?” she nodded. Ed took the gag out, the girl breathed deeply. “What is you name girl? -   “…ci… Cindy, sir” – “Ok Cindy, please stay as you are for a moment. I see that you have been hurt, I will examine you to check if you are ok and then we will loose your straps, is that ok” she nodded crying “he raped me, he hurt me, I’m in pain ..”  -  “I know Cindy we take care of you” Ed looked at the red stripes first, but they were superficial “you have been caned? “ she nodded. With his hands he touched her breast, palpating her left breast  - “ouch “ she said – “This one is ok, you have no internal injuries”. Then her right breast, which was also ok. “This is already good news for you. However in the hospital they will scan you to be sure.”  She nodded “ … it hurts down my vagina… she whispered. Ed looked down and he saw a round piece of wood in her vagina. He widened with his fingers her labia and saw it was a cut of shaft, but covered with rough sand paper. “Cindy did you see this object before he put it inside you?  She nodded “..it was terrible  he pushed it in slowly and turned it around it hurts…” -  “Cindy, have you seen it?” he repeated his question  - “Yes he showed me close by…”  - Cindy, it is important you answer this correctly: I see it is covered with sandpaper, but are there any nails of or pins or glass or any metal hurting elements on it?”  -  “No, only sandpaper glued on it, but it hurts on the slightest move” - “Good Cindy, I will take it out, I will do it as good as I can, but it will hurt you a little, I have no choice”  she nodded and bite on her lip.  Ed put his left hand forming a V with 2 middle fingers on each side of the shaft, pushed his hand down over her labia and on her clit to protect it. The he opened his fingers to push her labia further open. With his right hand he took the shaft firmly. With a strong quick movement he pulled the shaft from her vagina  in a second of time.  Aiiiii “ Cindy cried. “It is over Cindy. I will now put a spray in you vagina for disinfection and it contains also a pain killer” he ordered Karen to give him something of the hand case she had carried with her. It was an aerosol spray with a long tube that he glided gently but deep between her labia inside her vagina. He activated the spray inside her. “First it is cold, but when you feel it gets warm, the pain killer starts working” she nodded and let Ed do his work. After some time  it is getting warm now. It hurts less” – “Good” said Ed; slowly he pulled the aerosol pipe outside, liquid came out of her vagina. Then he opened her labia again and put some spray on the outside and on her clit.

 

Meanwhile at one the guy on the ground seemed to wake up: “What is going on here” he shouted  You don’t have the right to be here.” Jim responded with a hard smack in his stomach. “You will keep you fucking mouth shut, is that understood!”  Hearing the voice of her aggressor Cindy was terrorised again and started crying. “ Calm down Cindy, we have him under control “ She calmed down “Who are you?” she asked – “Never mind Cindy, we are a secret task force. But I apologise that I cannot reveal more details  -   “Are you CIA?” . Ed did not answer and changed subject : “Cindy I will now give you an injection. It will distress you, there is also some pain killer in it, you will feel relaxed but stay awake.”  Karen gave him the product and the injection needle.  Ed gave her the injection in her arm.

“So, now we will release you. Do not stand up before we say it, ok?” she nodded. They took the straps from her wrists first. Ed took her wrists in his hands to gave a short massage to have the blood circulation working. Then her ankles and he helped her out the chair. He turned her around and looked at her back and bottom. Her bottom was plenty of dark red stripes who have been bleeding before.  “Jesus” Ed exclaimed “ he did a rough job with you. Wait I will put some unguent.”  He took an unguent out of the case, opened it put some on his fingers and put it on her bottom cheeks. She moaned a bit but kept quite. “… He raped me also there…” she said with a feeling of shame. Ed opened her cheeks and inspected the outside of her arse, put a finger half an inch inside . Only some liquefied sperm was on his finger. “Ok” he said “you are not bleeding. Mention it when you are at the hospital”

As she had some difficulties to stand he looked at her feet, which were swollen. The guy had given also a spanking on her soles, which has been painful.

 

“Now Cindy, I would appreciate you react. It will help you to overcome later traumas. You hate the guy there  she nodded angry. “Very good. I want you take your revenge. My colleague  will bring him close by here, but hold him strongly. Do not fear, he will not be able to do something to you. You may slam him, scratch him in him face, hurt him badly, as long you have the force to do it.”  -  “ But will he not get me back later???” she asked, worried.  – “No Cindy, you will NEVER see him again. We take care of him afterwards when you are on your way to the hospital”

Jim pulled him up, the guy tried to protest without success. Cindy looked right into his eyes. Her eyes coloured black from anger and hate. With her fist she gave him a smack on his nose that started bleeding. Then she continued to slam him and to scratch him with her fingernails, hard quickly without stopping during 3 to 4 minutes, until she was exhausted. The guy screamed for the first time and treated her as bitch and whore. 

 

“You feel well Cindy” asked Ed. For the first time she looked around. She smiled slightly to the 4 unknown people in black. “Thank you, Thank you ” she said fell with her arms around Ed’s neck , she went to Jim, Jane and Karen, giving them a kiss on their masks.

 

“We are happy Cindy we could safe you  - She looked at the other side of the cellar at the wall, showing us the board with photos of dead mutilated naked girls. Each having a cross burned on their forehead. Beneath each photo a number with a name. The last one showed only the little card with “9 – Cindy” .  “He said that he would burn a cross also.  With the iron warming up over there in a small open oven” They looked all at the photos and Jim looked with horror at photo “8 - Emily”. Fuck ’n bastard he mumbled, you will pay for this.

 

“Come now” said Jane  Where are you cloths?”  Jane smiled and realised that she was still naked. She didn’t really care now that everybody had seen her body. “He destroyed them, only my shoes are ok I think.”  They got a blanket around her body. Ed suggested that she would stay barefoot as her feet were to swollen to put shoes. In front of the hidden camera they waved to Charles, who started the car and crossed the road. They helped Cindy on the stairs and brought her to the car. Charles was the only without mask, but he had fake glasses and a fake moustache in order not to be recognised.  Before leaving Ed gave the package of the injection in her hands. “When you are in the hospital, give this to the Doctor, so he will know what type of injection you received.”

 

Charles brought her to the municipal hospital at the emergency gate. They came outside with a rolling stretcher. “What is the problem” they asked to Charles. “We found her, she is seriously hurt” Without shame Cindy opened the blanket to show her body. “Ok we know enough” they took Cindy up out the car and put her on the stretcher. “Sir you cannot leave the car here, please put it on the park yard over there and come back for the statement” Charles nodded but of course he  drove away and did not return to the hospital.   

 

5.       The revenge

 

Meanwhile in the cellar they had taken the guys cloths away and he was naked and firmly strapped to the chair.  Jim put extra cords. He could not move for an inch. “You do not have the right to do this. I will sue you!   Jim gave him a smack in his bleeding face and put the gag in his mouth. Secured, they left him alone downstairs, closed the door and locked it. Jim secured the door upstairs. He would not take any change now!

 

It was already over 10pm and for their alibi they had to be back. In the back street they entered the house. Took of their masks and put some other clothes over their black outfit. They confirmed their friends that the girl was free and that they had the killer as prisoner.

At 23 pm they went out at the front door, talking loudly and walking at the car. It was the time that Mrs Wilkes, the neighbour made a little tour with her dog.  Jane deliberately started a small conversation with her about the doggy. Then they left with their cars. They returned to the house but parked the cars in another street close by.

 

They returned to the cellar. It was the hour of revenge for their tortured daughters. They put on their masks and stood in a row in front of they guy, who really got scared.  They took the gag out of his mouth.  “Who are you? Leave me alone, you have not the right! What did you do with the girl? She is mine!   When he stopped screaming, Karen asked him his name. “That’s not your fucking business” he replied. Jim made one step forward grabbed one of his testicles and pushed it between his finger and thumb. “Stooopp “ screamed the guy. Jim increased the pressure, the guy was screaming harder. “Bob…..Johnson” he said. Jim released the testicle. Meanwhile Jane had searched the pockets of the guy jeans and showed the Driver license with his photograph on. It mentionned the name “ Robert Cleveland”  She showed it to Jim and Ed. Jim returned to the guy took his other testicle and crushed it as the previous one. They guy started screaming again.  “Next time you don’t lie anymore”

 

“What are you going to do?” he asked. “We will tell it right away” said Jane. She took a prepared text out of her pocket and started to read.

 

“ Robert Cleveland, in name of justice for the 8 death daughters you tortured and murdered and the torture of the ninth girl who escaped, we condemn you to suffer the same or similar tortures as you inflicted to these girls. For each and every girl you mistreated, you will be burned with the cross that  you used on them. Your body will be mutilated. We will do our utmost to inflict you as much pain we can. We will help you to remember what you did to them. You will have sufficient time to think about your criminal acts”

 

Robert opened wide his eyes. He realised now that it was finished for him. “Look, I want to speak to my lawyer  -  “You do not need him. The sentence is already there  Jane said. He got angry : “You have not the right. Delivery me to the police! You are sick people!”

 

Ed went to the board and took the photographs of Laura and Emily and got out of his pocket the photographs of the girls taken before Robert kidnapped them. He showed Robert the photographs from before in his left hand and the photos of the mutilated boy in his right hand.  “Look at them, did you ever thought how they suffered? “  -  “They were only sluts and whores, I needed to punish them” Jim grabbed again Roberts testicles, this time both and crushed them.  Robert screamed. 

 

“We will start the real work now”,  Ed said. He got out of his case a surgeon scalpel. Robert looked with horror “Nooooo!!!”   Ed took Roberts left nipple between his fingers, pushed it softly to have it erected, then he pulled the nipple. With the scalpel he started to cut the nipple off. He did it on purpose very slowly and with a sawing movement. Robert was yelling!  When he was cut off, he showed Robert his own nipple. He looked at his wife and said: “The poor guy is bleeding hard, we have to stop the bleeding” she nodded and took the heated iron poke with the cross on it. It was red heated metal. She went to him, “Noo please no “ he hurled. Karen pushed the burning cross on the bleeding opening where the nipple was. The burned flesh was smelling badly. Robert yelled and fell unconscious due to the horrible pain. The flesh was burned and he lost no blood anymore. Ed threw some water on his face and Robert awoke with incredible pain in his chests. “This is for Laura” Karen said. Ed handed the scalpel over to Jim. He took the other nipple and did the same. Cutting slowly with a saw movement. Again Robert was screaming. Finally the nipple was cut off. Jane had taken the re-heated poke with the cross and put it very slowly on the bleeding wound. Again Robert was yelling, screaming in horrible pain and lost again his consciousness. Water in his face made him again awake. “This is for Emily” said Jane.

 

“Ok, we will have a coffee upstairs now. Too much at once is not interesting. He will loose his feelings. So we leave him a moment that he can recover and feel better the pain.” Explained Ed.

They left Robert alone with the burning pain in his chests. The pain could not be described.

“Please hand me over to the police” he begged. “Please, I will never do anything anymore to a girl  -  “There, you are right Robert, you can be sure that you will never torture or kill a girl anymore! Confirmed Ed.

 

6.       Revenge is getting worse

 

They went up taking a coffee and started to search the house. Jane found a kind of Diary, going back to the age Robert was 18. He started the diary when he left prison in New Mexico. He has been in jail for the rape of a minor Mexican girl. He did not kill or torture her at that time. “You see, these sick individuals fall always back and they even getting worse!”  Everybody nodded.

 

After half an hour they went back to Robert still horrified what was happening to him. Karen went to him. He could see her angry eyes, full of hate. It scared him. “We will do you a favour” she said. She took his penis and started rubbing him. Robert could not avoid an erection. She continued her hand job without a speaking word. Finally he cum. The sperm spitted out. “Was it nice? Did you enjoy?” she asked him – “Eeuuhh, yes thank you “ he said. “Great” said Jane “Remember, this was the last orgasm you had in your life. “  At once he came back to reality. “No, what are you going to do….” – “Very simple” explained Ed. “as you have apparently a problem in behaving yourself, we will help you. We will cut of your testicles one by one and then we will cut your penis off : castrate you with other words”  -  “No please no, no ooohhh” he started crying as a child  “Please delivery me to the police, please please…”   

 

Ed took the scalpel. “Lets first give him a circumcision  He pulled the prepuce and started again slowly to cut it away. Robert screamed again.  Ed handed the scalpel over to Jim and explained him to proceed. He cut first the skin of the scrotum then he cut the testicle in the middle and finally he cut the testicle away.  Roberts cry was nearly unbearable. It was the exact punishment they planned. Then Jane did the same with the other testicle. Robert fell again unconscious. They waited a moment and then they woke him up with water on his face. Now it was Karen who took the scalpel and with a sawing movement his gland got off. Robert did not believe how heavy the pain was, he could not believe his suffering. Finally Ed cut off the remainder of the penis and with the heated cross he burned the wound, being sure that the urethra was burned and closed.  Robert would not be able to urinate after this.

 

They left him a moment; they went to the garage to check if the keys were on the van and if anything was left in it. When they came back in the cellar Robert was crying, asking them to forgive him.  They took him out of the chair and attached him with his handcuffs to the ceiling. Each of them took a cane and they started him beating caning him from all sides together, he was moving his body wild, but the parents put all they hate and force in beating him. All over his body except his head. When they finished, they were exhausted from the effort. They looked the victim. They knew that this would not bring back their beloved daughter, but they felt the satisfaction of giving that monster his punishment. He had tortured at least 9 girls.

 

“Wait, we did forget something” said Ed and he took the shaft covered with the sand paper he taken out of Cindy’s vagina. Robert had so much pain  that he only looked at the engine without giving reaction. He know what they were going to do. He handed the shaft to Jim who opened Roberts cheeks and brutally inserted the shaft in his anus. Again Robert cried it out.

 

“So Robert” said Karen “did you enjoy what you did to our daughters. “It is nearly finished. Still 5 crosses left to burn on your body. You have already 3. You know one cross for each of the girls and it will be over. We will give you peace” They burned the 5 crosses. On each bottom cheek one and one on his back and on the sole of each foot. Again he yelled of pain.

 

Finally Jim took him upstairs, pulling him over the steps and the floor and threw him in the van.  The others took all their objects away and of course also the hidden camera. They checked all again and again. They closed the cellar and went to the van in the garage. They did not have to worry about fingerprints as they have been wearing gloves all the time. Ed and Jim drove the van and Jane and Karen did take their car.

 

7.       Roberts peace

 

They drove approx 20 miles outside the town and went to a private owned hunting ground in the woods. In principle nobody was allowed there of course. The days before they had prepared a 5 ft deep pit, a wooden case was in it. They had for security covered everything with autumn leafs although nobody was coming there.  They took the case out and opened it. They got Robert out. “You are going to kill me?”  he asked with some relief, hoping that death would stop the pain.    “No” Jane said, “We will NOT kill you. We will put you inside, we will even put an oxygen container as the divers use, close the case and put it inside and cover it with earth.”  -  “No, please kill me or torture me further  no, no please  I’m claustrophobe, I cannot stand to be in that”   -  “That is excellent news you tell us Robert” said Ed. He explained to the other, that this torture is probable worse that all what he had suffered.

 

Robert could not escape. He was now lying in the wooden case, well secured that he was not able to try to suicide himself. Ed gave him a bottle water to drink. It was part of the torture as his urethra was burned, so in a few hours he would suffer there also as he would be unable to piss. The he took an injection needle with a product in it. “This is called Exigine” he explained to Ed. “It will avoid you to sleep, unfortunately it will cause some muscular excitation and will increase your pain. So you see you will have plenty of time to remember what you have done to all these innocent girls”    --  his face was torn his eyes in horror “ Please no, please I have quite a bit capital that I earned when my mother died. I will give it all to you, but please don’t burry me alive”   -- Karen replied him that we were not at all interested in money of a serial killer.

 

They closed the case with nails, let  it down with the  ropes and covering it with  earth. The noise of his screams vanished as more earth was thrown on the case. Then they put leafs over it, and you could not even see that there has been a pit.

 

They left the van several miles from there, where they left their car. Took off the number plates and Jim threw a molotoff cocktail in the van which exploded and burned.. 

 

 

8.       The after revenge

 

To obtain details, the FBI of course questioned Cindy. However she did not knew where Robert had hidden her. She did not know who was the Task force (she told the FBI that she tough it was the CIA, but of course after checking they were unaware of this). The press made full articles asking for witness or people who knew something. Not the slightest result. John Bradling FBI officer, suspected that is was revenge from somebody, but all parents from previous victims had a solid alibi.

 

Only 2 months later when the owner of the house did not get the rent, he entered his house and found the horrors in the cellar. FBI went there with Cindy, who did recover completely, both physically and mentally. She confirmed the place, but could not give any details of her saviours. In fact as she owned her life to them, she gave less and less info and even contradictory information to protect them. Again the affair of the serial killer was stuck.

 

Six months after the facts a journalist of the local television station received an anonymous letter with a detailed map, indicating him that he had to go at that place and dig at least 5 feet deep. With a colleague they went over there. The indications were accurate, they took the leafs away, and they could see that the ground has been opened in the past. When digging they found the wooden case. They realised it was a grave and called the police. When they opened the case there was the naked and tortured body of Robert. Due to the period of the year the body was not yet in state of heavy decomposition. His driving licence was lying on him. Quickly FBI knew who it was. Cindy confirmed she recognised the face of her torturer on the photograph of his driver’s license.

 

The autopsy confirmed that the person was alive when buried. He should have suffered terribhly during several days, not only from the tortures, but more from the fact the bladder was closed and that the urine infected his bladder and body. The parents of the children reacted of course with approval. Whoever did this, was an hero, was the opinion of most of them. Only some human rights activist protested, but due to lack of support it faded away. Not the slightest indication that led to the authors. People were satisfied that they knew now that the serial killer was death. He could not harm anybody anymore.  Finally the press lost interest.

 

 

 

 

9.       Epilogue

 

Dr Edward Hobson received convocation of FBI officer John Bradling. He got used to it, nearly all parents had been there again and again.

“You are a doctor Mr Hobson?”  Ed nodded. “Well I have here the autopsy report of the lab and a separate note with “non-scientific” remarks that my colleague writes to help me. It is not really part of the file, but normally we keep it as it can help the investigation”

Ed did not react. 

“Doctor, you know that they found traces of Exigine in the “victims” blood. You know what it is”       Of course” replied Ed “ It is an exitant, it avoids patients to sleep”

“My friend writes that it is not a current product but only used by surgeons in case that patient for their safety my not sleep under any circumstance  - “Indeed, so what?”  - “Aren’t you a surgeon who has access to these products?” – “Yes, but I’m not the only surgeon in the United States  - “Indeed, but I believe that you are the only surgeon who could have a motive to eliminate this killer”  - “Perhaps, but I have an alibi, confirmed by the neighbours of friends the evening that all happened”   - “Correct, but there was also a former Marine Corps officer with you”  - “Am I not allowed to talk to the parents of another victim?”  - “Sure you are allowed” – “What do you want to know officer? Does the FBI now protect criminals? Don’t forget WE are victims” – “ This card has been used to open the kitchen door” John said showing a white semi hard card. “Have a look to the other side” he turned the card around. “Shit” thought Ed “it is my business card. The only mistake I made” Ed did not reply but starred forward to John.

John Bradling smiled. He knew he got them.

 

He looked in the eyes of Ed, opened his drawer took out a lighter and burned the business card in front of Ed. Then he took the unofficial explanations and he burned the paper also.

He collected the burned paper put it in an envelope and handed it over to Ed. “Can you do me a favour and put it somewhere in a wastebasket outside this office” Surprised he took the envelope.  John closed the file. He took a marker, draw 2 diagonal lines over the file, and wrote between them “Investigation closed”

 

John gave him his hand. “Thank you” he said to Ed, still surprised. “May I know why?” asked Ed.  From his drawer he took a photo of a beautiful girl, the same age of Laura. “This is my niece, my sisters daughter, sorry this WAS my niece.  Vicky was number 2. I only regret I was not with you that night” 

 

 

 

 

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