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Riding the Wooden Pony
Author: icechic
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(Added on Oct 22, 2002)
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She's yours... that much is evident as the wooden plank splits her pussy lips and she, rocking her hips, rides it rocking the torturous wood against her sensetive folds -- herself. (it's a wooden horse) |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jun 6, 2004 |
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Unexcusable not to give proper credit to the original writer. Leaves me to wonder about the other short stories this author has posted. (1/10)
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bracemaiden
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Feb 13, 2004 |
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I have to agree with many of the others, with cudos to shytilwet for pointing out the plagarism. It is well done, and compliments to catholic guilt for doing it. Icechic should have given proper credit. (4/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 22, 2004 |
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Love the subject, only wish it was longer (10/10)
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zephyr
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Jan 8, 2004 |
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This story is a mere reorganization of the original text from Catholic Guilt with a little bit of new input from the author. Whole sentences are lifted from the original, showing the lack of effort to even rephrase it. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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This story is both good and original.
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The problem is the parts that are good are not original and the parts that are original are not good.
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I too remember reading this, almost word for word, on CatholicGuilt ages ago.
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I've given this a four because its good, but please it when its so blatantly passed off as someone else's work, really its just "lacks any real quality' from my point of view. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
shytilwet
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Aug 29, 2003 |
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Terrific story........Unfortunately CatholicGuilt did it first.
http://www.captivity.com/bdsm_bondage/wooden_pony/ (1/10)
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le forgeron
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Aug 29, 2003 |
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More than a short essay, the rythm look like a poem.
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| Reviewer:
Kray
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Nov 4, 2002 |
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Really fine, I like it!
Bye (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Oct 28, 2002 |
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This is a really good short short story. Not really a story but a short essay on the evaluation of the slave riding the pony.
Because of the theme it cannot be longer but it is well written and enjoyable. (9/10)
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