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Big Girls Do Cry
Author: Fox
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(Added on May 31, 2003)
(This month 53704 readers) (Total 67930 readers) |
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I was determined to make my pony girl cry ...when a lover offered her help. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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Having spoiled myself reading all the f/f pieces I can find, I wasn't sure I could even make it through a m/f one. The ending made it worth it. A very nice and unexpected turnabout. Enjoyed the description of Xue Lan, and I would like very much to learn more about Maliia. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Oct 27, 2003 |
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I like this kinky little story very much.
The descriptions are rich and full, although a tad pedantic in spots for my tastes, and I particularly enjoyed the fresh metaphors. There are a couple of really nice ones there.
In amongst all the gentile euphemisms, however, a few lines kind of jarred me a little. E.g. ‘I almost came in my pants’ and ‘She grabbed my cock’ seemed crass and out of place in this rather articulate story. Maybe its just me?
I think too that the blurb is a bit blury, which is a shame because its certainly a very worthwhile read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
LadyLibra
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Sep 9, 2003 |
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I hope you have more stories on the way. I plan on adding your name to my bookshelf. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2003)
- Thank you for the compliment. I have several stories already posted here, and a few more to come.
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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Interesting reading. Short but was interesting. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2003)
- <smiling> I oft use the word "interesting" as a non-committing review ... Be that as it may, you gave the story 3 and a half stars, so I thank you. What would you suggest I do to get another star?
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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Oh wow. Not only was this story near-perfect as far as grammar and spelling go (a rarity here, to say the least!), but it was beautifully written as well! I thoroughly enjoyed the twists of plot, and I would love to read more! Devotedly....
-anguissette (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2003)
- Near-perfect, why thank you! That is the highest compliment any writer can hope to achieve!
We Canadians use different spellings for certain words ... colour instead of color, for example. I assume these are the spelling inconsistencies ...
Thank you all for your feedback.
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| Reviewer:
blackshadowmast
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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Loved it, but I've learned my lesson; never leave two women alone for such a long period of time. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2003)
- Heh heh, I learned that lesson too :-)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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LOVE IT!
Impeccable style (as usually) with light flare at the end. Especially arousing love scene – raw and intense. Thought i would love to see what predicament “gentle” Master got himself into, i treasure short, arousing vignettes (maybe my attention span is to short for sagas ;) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jun 1, 2003 |
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Good stuff.
Neat ending.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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May 31, 2003 |
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Cute and sexy little scene.
(8/10)
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