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Author: Chameleon
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(Added on Oct 17, 2003)
(This month 52248 readers) (Total 68178 readers) |
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A woman learns to overcome her shame at being a natural submissive and truly gives herself for the first time to her husband and Master. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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well written, well paced and credible. often both participants in such a relationship may be plagued with guilt. of course, sometimes that can translate into the need for more punishment... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Oct 19, 2003 |
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Mmmm, a very good story. My only complaint was the sex scene was very short, but that fitted with the story, so leave it as it is :) (9/10)
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