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Summer at the Beach
Author: sandy
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(Added on Jan 27, 2004)
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Two young women are abducted, placed in mortal danger, raped and brutally sodomized. |
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| Reviewer:
Dusty Spring
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Feb 15, 2010 |
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What a dumb ending to an otherwise promising story. Bummer. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 2, 2004 |
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nice and refreshing (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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Great story telling with an unlikely ending. Some typos and errors that can be easily fixed. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jan 31, 2004 |
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Wow, shades of John Steinbeck. Marine biology at the good old BDSMLIB. There is some wonderful story-telling here, (aside from a most unlikely denouement), and the local color, as Moggy says, was first rate. But there were a fair number of typos, too many grammatical slips, and quite a few of the kinds of misspellings that slip past spell-checkers. ///
The ropes were course and bit into her pale flesh ///
Finally Bubba 1 through back his head ///
my body began to shack uncontrollably ///
my mouth gapped open ///
scoured our soar, burned bodies///
Bottom line -- a clever, imaginative and well-researched story marred by some careless proof-reading and a weak ending.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 28, 2004 |
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Well, I'm a hopeless romantic, and I liked the twist at the end, even if it stretched the bonds of believeability way past the breaking point. Yep, I liked it, but I'm ashamed of myself a little for it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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There were many good things about this story, particularly the author's authentic grasp of the local geography, flora and fauna. The writing of the central section was well sustained. I would have liked the ghost crab to have a bigger role. For example 'he' could have assisted an escape, cutting a rope with its claw? ;-), that would have been more realistic than the rather surprising deal struck at the end. That disappointment aside, I thought this was a worthwhile read. (8/10)
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