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    | April May
    
    Author: Dennis C. Lee |   
    |  | (Added on Jan 24, 2005)
            (This month 69517 readers) (Total 100069 readers) |   
    |  | A college student becomes the victim of a mind controller, who then sells her to a sadistic pimp. |  
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Rook
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Mar 26, 2006 |   
    |  | Very good beginning. Good characters, good scene and great humilation. The sexual descriptions wsa great. Great turn on. Would love to see more on this story. (7/10)
 
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    La Toya
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 28, 2005 |   
    |  | Good Start! I look forward to reading more. (8/10) 
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    bisarah
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 24, 2005 |   
    |  | A very good beginning ... can't wait to read more.  There were typos, however!  If you are going to use foreign words, you need to know how to spell them. (8/10) 
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    SimonMagick
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 24, 2005 |   
    |  | It's a good start. I like that things happen quickly to April. There's a few typos. I hope you'll continue the story soon. (9/10) 
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