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The Commuter Train
Author: Dottie
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(Added on May 20, 2005)
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A successful business woman (Dottie) and a petite submissive female medical researcher (Deni) paths cross a commuter train ... the spark between the two is ignited and builds into a raging fire of desire. |
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| Reviewer:
oliveroflondon
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May 23, 2005 |
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A very nicely written gentle story. It certainly reads like more than a work of fiction. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dottie
(Edit) (May 23, 2005)
- Hi oliver ... thanks for your comments and review. Ahhhh ... how did you guess it is all NOT a work of fiction!!! I discovered my 'bi' side kind of late in life and love to share my feelings about it with others. I also write for a very talented artist and a very good friend of mine. He illustrates my stories and sort of makes them come alive! If you would like to see my stories??? illustrated, the link is:
http://www.samarelart.com/Adultstories/dottieWom/dottie_archive.htm
I also keep a picture and 'bio' at that website if you would like to know more about me. Again, thank you for your comments. They are deeply appreciated. Love, Dottie.
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