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Store Clerk
Author: SG
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(Added on Jun 18, 2005)
(This month 47227 readers) (Total 91763 readers) |
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Jessica goes to work but with the added spice of a special toy and a chastity belt, the keys to which were left of home. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 9, 2010 |
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As already stated by others there are a few spelling errors and missing words, but these do not detract from a well told pacey story. Somehow i don't think she is going to be fit for work in the morning ;
i hope we have more soon ..... please. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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i love the concept of the story, orrignal and well done (10/10)
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dragonfly996
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Nov 25, 2008 |
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Looking good!!! Where to next time.... Thanks (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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I like the premise, unrealistic as it is, mainly due to the novelty. The excited style of writing is also quite appealing. I'm glad that the main character has not yet had to use the bathroom - some things are better left unsaid. The good points overpower the few oops'es and the apparent fear of paragraphs. Paragraphs don't cost extra - use them. (8)
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Update - I really enjoy the way the story is turning! The grammatical oopses are gone, and the plot rolls along quite entertainingly! (9) (9/10)
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bobanddianne
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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A wonderful concept with outstanding development... Very erotic.
Eagerly looking forward to future chapters. (10/10)
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ravenfish55
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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a very good well written story, of a woman who lovesto be in a situation she can do nothing about.good descriptions of her day.plenty of scope formore to happen to her. (9/10)
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DJ Tuk
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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Great so far - more please (9/10)
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rce
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Jun 20, 2005 |
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A very good, fascinating idea, rather well executed. (7/10)
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gandalfs_heir
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Jun 18, 2005 |
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Like the idea - am keen on the further process! (10/10)
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Jacen
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Jun 18, 2005 |
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Some spelling errors, a few but noticable in the short peice. The writing is also a bit simple, and often seems merely a set-up for later chapters. (7/10)
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oliveroflondon
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Jun 18, 2005 |
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I think that I was as turned-on as Jessica. (9/10)
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