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First Entrance
Author: freeasair
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
(This month 62480 readers) (Total 81388 readers) |
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A novice discovers the power of a real Master who releases the pent-up tide of his submission. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
somewriter
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Sep 22, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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Really well written. Good protrayal of internal life on submission. Looking forward to more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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Nicely done. What a lucky slave to have found what he needs and wants. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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altho not my genere, it was real good (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Well described story. The author made me feel like i was there watching the action. (8/10)
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