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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
errol42
(Edit) |
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Dec 12, 2005 |
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Too short but fun (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slave48
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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There was a good scene here, but for me the way it was described was unconvincing. Use of the first person in present tense can work but it seemed to me that there was insufficient description of the character's reactions and emotions and too much emphasis on the action.. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
makito
(Edit) |
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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Very well written with a fantastic story. I am left wanting to see what happens next. Thanks for your work! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
shypixy
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Sep 8, 2005 |
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really great to read about dominate females (or males) taking a submissive male and turning him into a sissy... keep up the great work (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Dark Crusader
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- Thank you very much for the review. This was my first attempt at a public story and I'm sure I have some refining to do....I appreciate the encouragement, it lets me know I'm on the right track
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