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The Baron’s daughter
Author: The SmutFairy
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(Added on Feb 10, 2006)
(This month 53127 readers) (Total 64379 readers) |
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He was a forty something organizer of a fetish ball who had see it all. Lisa was an eighteen year old claiming to be the product of his student medical ‘donations’. Perhaps she is not as naive as she appears and his best friend would have to sort this out. That would be after his wife transformed Lisa into the ultimate fetish princess. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wsmoonshadow
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this story, I would like to see more of this story though, maybe what happens after the party. You should think about it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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Liked the concept very much, but it badly needed some editing in spots. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DJ Tuk
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Feb 11, 2006 |
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Great story - I do hope you are planning some more chapters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SensoryOverlord
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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An excellent story! Its warm and human and funny, as well as hot and rubbery. Not often a porn story leaves me with happy grin at the end.
The mechanics of the writing could do with a little work though. Maybe some proof reading? Don't be afraid to rework till its right. (8/10)
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