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Doretta\'s Mistake
Author: Amasterfound
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(Added on Mar 15, 2006)
(This month 14244 readers) (Total 28762 readers) |
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Doretta gets in trouble with her traditional Greek older brother for borrowing money from a loan shark. He has a surprise or two waiting for his little sister. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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Apr 20, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this very much. I hope you will add more chapters.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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Good story, Maybe brother should of had, his wife help out. Future chapter, could have the Candy as well (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Good story. Believe she started to like it! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SEVERUSMAX
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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AWESOME story, babe! Keep up Doretta's punishment and Anton's dominance! (10/10)
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