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Becoming Patty
Author: Curvy Angel
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(Added on Apr 29, 2006)
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Matt Patterson is a first class business man. He\'s handsome, sexy, and well liked. One morning he wakes up to find himself in a dark basement and strange things start to happen to him. He\'d always had a fetish about big black men, but he never dreamed.... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ilikeerotic
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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I think you have all the qaulities to be a great writer. Touch up the presentation a bit however. I am curious to where patty girl lands herself. I hope you finish this soon. (10/10)
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Cuckold_DK
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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Can't wait for the continuation !!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mozelle
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May 2, 2006 |
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I'm glad you all liked it. I will finish it very soon. I thought I had sent in the finished copy, but the rough draft ended up getting submitted! Sorry about that. Next time it will be easier to read. ;) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Von Schmiser
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Very nice, an enjoyable read. Might I suggest you break into paragraphs..It would make it easier to read. Above all please continue. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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let's see where to next (8/10)
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