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Ashley\'s nudist afternoon
Author: superion
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(Added on Nov 1, 2006)
(This month 54461 readers) (Total 71155 readers) |
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Ashley lost her clothes and all her belongings at the bench. Can she get home safety? |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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Weak. Very weak. Any normal person would call the cops when the car was stolen. (4/10)
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jip
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Nov 4, 2006 |
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I simply liked the story. Exiting but embarrasing situation even for somebody who is used to be naked. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Nov 2, 2006 |
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A good concept and plot, but needs some polish. Spellcheck would help a lot -- and the misspelling of beach pointed out how often the same words were used! Vary things a bit. I'd suggest posting this in the forums for some feedback, a bit of work and it'll be a really nice story. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Nov 1, 2006 |
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its a bit unfair to rate a storey I didn't finish but I just gave up. Get a proofreader! It's a beach not a bench and when Ashley's 'stuffs' got taken I quit! (4/10)
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