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Tony\'s Training
Author: John Comstock
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(Added on Dec 6, 2006)
(This month 55414 readers) (Total 70473 readers) |
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Together, they found a way to change his behavior . . . |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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Uhm, folks? This is a FANTASY story. It's part of a series the author is doing. And, oddly, I don't hear anyone complain when someone posts an equally unrealistics M/f story. Get with the program. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Dec 11, 2006 |
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Too short but a good concept well presented (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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I must agree with the previous reviewer. No resistance makes the story unbelievable but then again it is fiction. The spelling and grammer werre good but I think I recall the plot in another story. (4/10)
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azrlg17
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Dec 7, 2006 |
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Good grammar and spelling. Otherwise lame and unbelievable. Not one act of rebellion. He accepts the rules immediately. A public company doing abductions and torture? Ridiculous. (4/10)
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