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    | Reviewer: 
    Curtis
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 19, 2006 |   
    |  | I agree with mkemse this time.  It's okay, not bad, mediocre.  I think you need to write more and gain some experience so that you can change some of the 'she did this, then I did that' to more of a narrative.  You did some of that with what the narrator was thinking, but there's a little too much distance and not enough emotional involvement here.  It was a good idea, and not badly executed.  I hope you try again. (6/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 18, 2006 |   
    |  | had potential to be a realy hot story, with the theme and idea, but missed the mark still a good read (6/10)
 
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    Lee Boudine
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 18, 2006 |   
    |  | Very good for a brief consensual story about a nice young couple. not really bondage play, but submission by the wife. The traditional concept of a marriage is that the wife should submit to her husband and the husband is to love his wife. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Elkor
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 17, 2006 |   
    |  | This appears to be a resubmit of the story from April 2006 by this author. Have there been changes? Quick glance of the first half doesn't show any significant changes... (5/10)
 
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