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The Proposal
Author: Some Writer
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(Added on Jan 14, 2007)
(This month 51021 readers) (Total 58281 readers) |
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A couple propose that one of them give up their safe-word for an evening. The girl loses but the resulting experience is not what she had feared. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bolondro4
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Mar 12, 2007 |
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Soory for any mistakes in my English, I´m Spaniard.
I have enjoyed maily in your history the control of the tempo. Also, the characters are persons, not just fucking-bits-of-meal. In the phrase when the male says something like " I kow it´s not tipycal for dom, but I like to have my butt ful, so..." you get a major success. You paint a whole mental map in just a few words.
I like more spanking that bondaje. If only the topics were changed, this history would be near perfect for my tastes. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mishka
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Very enjoyable. I liked the characters, they were real to me, not the cut-out average story couple. The game and mutual nerves realistic and plausible. The scenarios also believable and stimulating. The ending was predictable, but I was hoping for it, so no complaints. The scene with the chains on the couch was a little difficult to visualize. It took a bit to understand her position. It may have been reader error, though. Very enjoyable. Definitely will be looking for more of your stuff. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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Well done. The beginning seemed a little weak in establishing the characters. The middle was good, and the end was well done. Short stories are hard to write and you've done a good job. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
somewriter
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2007)
- Thank you for the review, DeGrinch. Your comments are much appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 14, 2007 |
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I loved reading 'The Proposal'. It was very well written, arousing, erotic and extremely romantic. Being a hopeless romantic myself, this was a plus. I love the way the relationship is developed between the characters. It could be a page out of real life....and probably already has been or soon will be. The sense of 'realness' made everything I have already listed in the story and more feel even stronger. The title was a nice tricky touch as well. I definately look forward to reading more of your work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
somewriter
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2007)
- Thank you for taking the time to write the review crickette. I'm glad you liked the story - the romantic and realism aspects were what I was particularly focusing on.
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