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Tourist Trap Author: Lonely Puppet
(Added on May 26, 2007) (This month 23523 readers) (Total 44994 readers)
A vacation to Japan takes a turn for the worse when a tourist meets a female martial artist who loves to torture, rape, and enslave men. If Part 1 is well recieved I'll continue the story.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: azrlg17 (Edit) Rating: Jun 5, 2007
It's better than your 1st story. At least he doesn't break in the 1st night. But I still find it too short. His first 2 nights of slavery are described and then there's a big jump described like "and this continued for a month". Then he tries to escape once and is caught (it seems by sheer luck). She punishes him and then he never tries anything ever again and is happy to be a slave. That's still too fast.
In most nc stories on this site the victim holds out, holds out, holds out and then breaks. I think someone would first try to hold out, then act as if broken and still try to escape.
(6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 31, 2007
nice i dea of a Fedom sotry that is NC and cbt (7/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: May 29, 2007
Very good story the plot was great. (8/10)

Reviewer: sissymaid (Edit) Rating: May 27, 2007
great story and look forward to reading more.sure others will rate it highly too. (9/10)

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