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Watermelon Display
Author: Wolffie
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(Added on Jul 4, 2007)
(This month 59839 readers) (Total 70560 readers) |
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Mistress takes a slave on probation to a harsh and demanding display in front of other Mistresses and their slaves. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
houler25
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Dec 22, 2011 |
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very exciting storie. After starting reading yiu cannot stop till the end. Good work (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2012)
- thank you - I am glad you could not stop
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Sep 2, 2011 |
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Not really into watersports, but nevertheless, the story did hold my interest. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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Heavy dose of humiliation, slave disciplines slave, watermelon fucking, intense pee withholding scene, all at a party of dommes with their slaves in tow. Wish I were there. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2007)
- Well, you were!
Thank you on your vote!
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| Reviewer:
Avralivia
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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very well written, loved the storyline, all round enjoyable fiction, and one of my favourite topics, humiliating men! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2007)
- thank you . I am glad i hit on your favorite topic.
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