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Joey
Author: dale10
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(Added on Jul 31, 2007)
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A Latino thug comes to live with a Baptist Minister and his family and corrupts them into unspeakable shame. |
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| Reviewer:
seamusduggery
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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It's an alright story with a fair concept. I'd have to agree with chksng19 on the formatting issue. In addition the story could have been both better and longer if you had actually chosen to describe the sexual acts rather than just telling the reader they occured. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 13, 2007 |
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A harsh tale indeed. While not badly told, the formatting made it hard to read. You might ask the webmaster to repost it after you fix the jumps in the spacing.
Kind of a slow start, but getting better as you go along. (7/10)
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