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Danny's Dilemma
Author: dale10
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(Added on Nov 3, 2007)
(This month 144933 readers) (Total 183896 readers) |
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This story starts out mild but will get quite extreme by the end. It involves the blackmailing and totally abuse of a fifteen year old boy. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
avidreader
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Nov 13, 2007 |
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Always love your stuff but theres a major error in part 3. It repeats itself completely. got 2 part 3s in 1 haha. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barry Austin
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Nov 4, 2007 |
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Another character in the the mind of the author which will no doubt succumb to complete humiliation. Keep going Dale! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MissPiss
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Nov 4, 2007 |
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Not that bad of a start, i like the premise of your story but i think at times you repeat some things. But overall, a good start, looking forward to reading more! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
MissPiss
(Edit) (Nov 4, 2007)
- Btw, reading this story again, i like how your style is nice and simple with not an overabundance of too many characters (not at this point anyway), so it's easy to follow. Some stories in this site might be better written, however, they're soo long that it loses my attention. I want chapter 3!
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