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      Average (?):  (5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    bracemaiden
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Nov 17, 2007 |   
    |  | While the paragraph structure was not perfect, I found the story quite easily readable.  The slow and caring approach was enjoyable.  (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    heycarrieanne
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Nov 16, 2007 |   
    |  | It is always difficult to know who to blame for the set-up of the story, but you seem to have just a bunch of sentences thrown together here.  Your writing is very stilted. (2/10) 
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