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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
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Lowest
Rating: (6/10) |
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Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Sep 23, 2012 |
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A little bit more about the characters emotions (yes we know the writer was hesitant about the lesbianism b ut was she shaking with fear, did she have buttewrflies in her stomache?) would have been nice. Do write some more about these three, do they eventually live together? (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Elkor
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Dec 21, 2007 |
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While the diary writing style is interesting, but more as a summary than a story itself. It lacks depth to really capture the reader. This would be a good "Chapter 0" where each Chapter is a more detailed accounting of the entries in Chapter 0. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
Rocky
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Dec 15, 2007 |
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This one has a lot of potential, and I'd like to see you continue. Personally, I like the writing style; it's very readable, and I prefer it to the "Dear Diary" format. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 15, 2007 |
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the story was ok, enjoyable to read only wish you had not done it in a diary or journa;l style wrtiting, but ever aurthor has their own style (6/10)
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