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Death of the Ultimate Slave
Author: MasterD
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(Added on Jan 11, 2008)
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Slave trains her daughter to be her replacement, then is tortured over a period of days, torture to end in her very painful death. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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May 17, 2016 |
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Too cruel for me, but it is definitely an extreme story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Jan 29, 2008 |
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I sent in a revised chapter 1, which was not printed. Without the revision, chapter two and three, and especially the epilogue do not follow, although tey can probably stand on their own. Any idea how to get the revision to chapter 1 published? PS I really think this is a great story and deserves a 10. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 14, 2008 |
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Well told, with proper motivations and responses. Anxious for more (8/10)
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- Replied by:
masterdw
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2008)
- thanks for the review. I would love to hear more from anyone.
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