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Barbra become Wendy
Author: Brillig
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(Added on Jan 11, 2008)
(This month 49670 readers) (Total 54660 readers) |
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Yeah, Me and and old gf get to talking. This is the prologue. If you like, there's a lot more to come. If it's to wordy, just say so and I'll understand. |
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| Reviewer:
JAMFart
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Jan 13, 2008 |
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reasonable concept, good start with character development. believable dialogue. first chapter is enticing enough to encourage additional chapters, Too "wordy" ? not yet... (7/10)
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