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Punished
Author: caiged
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 56598 readers) (Total 70513 readers) |
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Maybe should call it a fantasy. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Daveacco
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Feb 4, 2008 |
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Well done Miss Caiged. Maybe I should get off my arse and finish my latest one. (you will get a preview of course!!) Keep up the good work Acco (8/10)
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slvWriting
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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It was nicely written, but the story wasn't good enough for me, it didn't generate any heat. It is just a description of the punishment the girl is undertaking, and I didn't even buy it, I didn't feel at anytime this could really happen. (7/10)
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