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Safe House
Author: A.Broadsword
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(Added on Mar 27, 2008)
(This month 56695 readers) (Total 69359 readers) |
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Having humiliated her husband a sucessful career woman reaps the benefits of changes to her own and her husband's behaviour. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Abe
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Mar 10, 2010 |
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It's not as bad as the other raters say. It's a male dominance fantasy in an unreal world, but a fun tale. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2008 |
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simply terrible (1/10)
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- Replied by:
a.broadsword
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2011)
- A completely ridiculous review
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Mar 28, 2008 |
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The author has a possibly interesting story he wants to tell. Shame the writing is so bad. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 28, 2008 |
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I hope you'll never walk up to a biker and tell him he has a nice 'moped'... chances are you'd be eating through a straw for a week...
As for the story, I suggest you try painting on canvas; you have potential as a surrealist or kubist. Dabbling with paint might work for you, it doesn't with words...
JJ (2/10)
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