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Confession
Author: Flinkar
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(Added on Aug 27, 2008)
(This month 12095 readers) (Total 23277 readers) |
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A girl is caught having sex with a nun and is blackmailed over it by her teacher. He makes he confess all her sins, then punishes her for them. |
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| Reviewer:
gypsiecowboy
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Aug 31, 2008 |
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grammar and spelling are really bad here...editing is an important tool. please learn to use it along with a dictionary. realism means giving details that show whatever you want the reader to know... but telling the reader instead doesn't work. "the day was hot" is a loser that tries to tell. "if you cracked an egg on the sidewalk it would scramble itself within moments" shows how truly hot it really was. (1/10)
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JonMaddux
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Aug 28, 2008 |
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The beginning it really good! I cant wait to read all about how the girl is violated and broken in! Would really enjoy the story if it also included the nun being blackmailed, violated, humiliated, broken, used... I do love a good nun story! (9/10)
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