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Still Life: A Marriage
Author: Beloved
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(Added on Jan 4, 2009)
(This month 50250 readers) (Total 58144 readers) |
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A woman in a sexless marriage fantasizes about getting fucked. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
aussiesubgirl
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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honest, heart-breakingly honest and true...wonderful writing and you stayed away from cliched images and storyline 'twists'. A1+!! Well done... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
BelovedPet
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
Pearlgem
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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I really enjoyed this sensitive, ecomonical story, but I have to admit, I kinda skipped over the email fantasies because a) they were a bit cliched, b) they were a bit too long, in context c) they were difficult to read in that small font. Otherwise I like your style very much. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
BelovedPet
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
aweta69
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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Looks like you captured the true feeling of not having the attention you so desperately want. Looking forward to see how you do with the lover issue. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BelovedPet
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- Thank you for taking the time to review my story. It is a stand alone story so there will not be a second installment. Or at least not one with a lover. Sorry to disappoint.
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| Reviewer:
skp2bear
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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Only a couple of places where I had to reread to get the meaning of the sentence. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BelovedPet
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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Although this is exquisitely written, for some reason, the story failed to arouse me.
Still, I am looking forward to eventual next chapters.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BelovedPet
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- It wasn't meant to turn you on. :) Thanks for the review.
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