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      Average (?):  (5.5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Escritor
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 12, 2009 |   
    |  | Some continuity errors, spelling errors and grammar errors lowered the rating for the story. But the lack of ending lowered it even more. Seems like a couple of paragraphs are missing. Anyway it was a nice story. Should the ending be added and the mistakes corrected, I would be more than gladly rate it better :) (6/10)
 
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