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THE FUNHOUSE
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Feb 11, 2009)
(This month 112174 readers) (Total 165840 readers) |
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Group of girls on spring break are enticed into a carnival\'s funhouse only to enter a nightmare. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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Interesting concept. Very well executed. A bit confusing at first, but it has the makings of an exceptional tale (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 12, 2009 |
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Must agree, in part, with the Major, below. Although I liked the first chapter as well. It's there of course, as a preliminary, but also mainly to set the tone of the story, painting a grim picture of dark foreboding.
Chapter 2 is simply a continuation of that darkness, with the addition of a glimpse as to the girls' fate.
Wonder where this is gonna lead.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 11, 2009 |
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Chapter one is not worth reading, worth a 3 it reads like the minutes of a council meeting but part Two livens up neatly, the last four paragraph or so are brilliant,10/10 (9/10)
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