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Video Store Slave
Author: Sirbootnocka
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(Added on Feb 14, 2009)
(This month 55409 readers) (Total 67789 readers) |
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Story of how I acquired my first sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 1, 2011 |
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Sorry I agree with JimmyJump, in one short episode the girl is giving away 23 million (dollar prsumably) for a life of slavery. Just to silly to be worth reading any further. (5/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 15, 2009 |
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Story is written way too casual. Introduction is like the chassis of a car, missing all of its spare parts. As so often is the case, the author is way too eager to get to the nasty parts, forgoing on the embodiment of the story.
Two unknowns meet and 6 paragraphs later he already calls the girl 'slave'. Right.
Details? None. Or the wrong ones. At the wrong moment.
The guy must be a tailor also. He can spot a woman's measurments from a mile away.
Not a bad write, but the author could concentrate more on writing a story than on getting his rocks off.
JJ (5/10)
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Lillyrose123
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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Great story.. Can't wait until part two. i really enjoyed the dynamics between the Master and slave..You managed to capture and show what a true Master/Dom is and how He should treat a slave..in real life... in my humble opinion
(9/10)
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