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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Excellent writing.
Alina Aamu almost exclusively concentrates her descriptions around the sexual activities of Alice and Amanda, but still manages to not come across as shallow, uninspired. On the contrary, thanks to the neat chiseling of her characters --through dialogue and behaviour-- Alina is able to set a certain mood of believability, pulling the reader into the story and making him/her root for Alina's life-like creations.
Very well done, miss Aamu.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ashantai
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Mar 29, 2010 |
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Very nice, fluffy story. I enjoyed the sense of 'realism' about it; there's no silly outlandish things here. The two characters are well portrayed, and your spelling and grammar are very good.
Very enjoyable, and I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jackdoe
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Jan 18, 2010 |
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great story, hope you will write more chapters (10/10)
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