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Her choice
Author: Davide Iolar
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(Added on Oct 29, 2010)
(This month 265735 readers) (Total 313647 readers) |
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To keep us from breaking up, my girlfriend agrees to submit to me sexually. She ends up regretting and loving that decision. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Apr 27, 2011 |
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Punctuation is important, without it it's hard for the reader to understand the picture that you as a writer are trying to draw. Use it.
Having said that the story itself is first rate and well put together. It could easly rate higher with a little work on the 'bones' of the writing itself. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 21, 2011 |
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An interesting story. More careful proof reading and editing could earn it a higher rating. I look forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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girlyboy46
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Dec 19, 2010 |
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Loved this story can't wait for the next part. Plenty more pain I hope. (9/10)
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