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Internal Investigation
Author: joyrider
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(Added on Nov 3, 2010)
(This month 126659 readers) (Total 164231 readers) |
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Sonya, a CIA operative, investigates Hing Lee\'s drug smuggling operation and thinks to mix sadistic pleasure with her business. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BadCittyLady
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Jul 28, 2012 |
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i am really loving this story and i do hope that you will be posting more soon! i am really looking froward to what exactly she has done to sona's breast! ;) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dusty Spring
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Mar 19, 2011 |
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Without the heroine's revenge the reader is left feeling like they wasted thier time with this story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 4, 2010 |
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Not bothered at all by certain grammatical flaws. I was a tad bothered though, by the use of 'she' too many times in too short a space.
Some paragraphs are written in a rather distant style, taking some of the tension out of the story, which is a pity.
For the rest, I can do else but rejoice in the fact that Joyrider has delivered a sompteous erotic tale. Harsh at times, but thanks to the level of refinement, that harshness comes across as sexy.
Story reminds me a bit of J Lewis' style, but with the author having gone out of his/her way to get rid of those staccato-built sentences...
Very well done.
JJ (9/10)
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