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Lactation Fun
Author: MasterMind B
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(Added on Jan 28, 2011)
(This month 73160 readers) (Total 99799 readers) |
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A short story about how I got my slave to lactate and the fun we had getting her to lactate and once she was lactating. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 2, 2011 |
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I have to concur with the Cat. The changing pov as well as the formatting (or lack of it) makes for a distraction. Being one who enjoys breast milk, the story makes me nostalgic! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Feb 1, 2011 |
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It is a great story with an original premise. My problem is that there are too many changes of POV. Where you are telling us the story and then, without any warning you are talking to your slave. I found that distracting. I am sure it will be better after some editing. (6/10)
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