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Sissy Downfall.
Author: Tim Davine
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(Added on Sep 1, 2011)
(This month 112211 readers) (Total 140011 readers) |
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A detailed description of my transformation at the hands of a femme dom. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Sep 10, 2011 |
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Pretty good story. I like how it dwells a lot on mood, depicting the thoughts of the character and how they respond to things. I enjoyed reading it overall, and hope to see more.
The use of second-person point of view was an unusual writing choice... I tend to prefer first or third-person myself, and I found this a bit off-putting. It's a perfectly valid choice, just one that happens to not be to my personal liking. (7/10)
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