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The Haven
Author: Vdias
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(Added on Jan 8, 2012)
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A personal fitness trainer and a snobby young executive find a hidden side to the tropical island resort called the Haven. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bleckerde
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Jan 21, 2012 |
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the story starts out very promising. i'm looking forward to future updates. (9/10)
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purplesi
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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looking forward to future chapters, great story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jan 14, 2012 |
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very promising. am looking forward to your updates. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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Story is saved by the writing style and the excellent dialogue and descriptions which make the characters stand out.
Otherwise, we would be stuck yet again with flat, two-dimensional figures of which half are pre-destined subs/masochists.
But Vdias keeps things interesting thanks to the fluidity of the tale and said dialogue.
Nice.
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
MrDang
(Edit) (Jan 11, 2012)
- Thanks for your feedback! I'm aware that I'm not breaking new ground here but re-treading worn steps. However I wanted to improve on the poor writing style that we so often see in these stories. As always, all feedback is appreciated.
Edit: I changed my name while publishing this story so sorry for any confusion.
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| Reviewer:
switchy76
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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brilliant. need more soon (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
fitzgilbert
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Jan 9, 2012 |
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j'attend deja la suite (9/10)
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